The Camouflage Had Spoken

You said there was a miss when I dwell within your recesses
You said there was a timeless when we ran into a quest

Chanting soul written on the piece of paper
As I believed lost be spoken bluntly in its verses
Chanted the insecurity
Uttered solely within the gust of melancholy

You say we are the world
We are the future and past
Camouflage finally revealed by the courtesy silence of yours

Your words which dispossessed by reality and not materialize  by the time
Your words which led to nothing but vain on a rhyme

Now we simply deprecated
Like dusts rippled on a flat surface atop the old album

As easy as it forgotten by you
To forget about who you are, who I am
To forget about the holder of the past
And now the throne is all yours

If time willingly to sacrifice its seconds
And roll back its ages wheels to the day of my times
I'd grab the vision where I stood and gazed upon this time


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                                                   3rd PLACE                                                  
                                               November's poem
                                      Contest Judged:  11/26/2012
                                    Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A

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Brown Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Yanny. Love, Carol
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December 3, 2012 at 3:39 PM
Thank you Carol, your comment is always uplifting :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 6:00 PM
a well crafted poem that you put a lot of thought into, Yanny. Congrats on the big win.
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December 3, 2012 at 3:38 PM
Thank you Andrea, you make my day :D
Song Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 2:49 PM
Hey...first time reading your work! Congrats on this personifying piece! Keep working on that beautiful English! WOW! gwendolen
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November 27, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Thank you gwendolen, it's a pleasure for having you too in here, i'm going to check your page too after this :)-Hug, Yanny
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November 27, 2012 at 9:02 AM
Wow! You really write so well and a great poem indeed my dear Yanny! I love it and I extremely enjoy reading it tonight. My huge hearty congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend! Cheers! thank you so much also for your precious time reading my poems, your wonderful comments and congratulations. All the best and luck always! love and hugs, Leonora
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November 27, 2012 at 4:02 PM
Thank you leonara, you are really delighten my day by stopping by and leaving some lovely comment :D,wishing you a wonderful day :)-Hug, Yanny
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November 27, 2012 at 1:37 AM
Big congratulations on your winning place Yanny, hugs xx
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November 27, 2012 at 2:40 AM
Thank you Mandy,it's been a pleasure to have a greeting by you :D
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November 26, 2012 at 9:39 PM
Yanny, . Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry..always~pd
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November 26, 2012 at 10:01 PM
Thank you PD, you're really make my day :D- Love&Hug, Yanny
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November 17, 2012 at 4:30 PM
Great Poetry.. so much like your style... hugs Michael
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November 17, 2012 at 6:15 PM
Thank you michael, glad that you like it :) - Hug, Yanny
Chafer Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 12:56 AM
Love it, very well written
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November 17, 2012 at 3:44 AM
Thank you Amber, glad that you like it :). Wished you a great holidays ^^- Hug, Yanny
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