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The Calming Seas

"I love the sea, its crashing waves are perfect imitation of the chaos in my soul." - Makhaira The seas exude a calm that is unique, Rising from tortured waves that can't stand still, When her mind’s in a whirl and oh so bleak! She watches the warring waves and feels thrilled… Their rise and fall mirrors her ups and downs, Into the far horizon she gazes, She is mesmerized by the rhythmic sounds, Soft beats in the endless sand amazes, A walk by the seas, ‘tis balm to her soul, The bottomless waters wash ‘way her cares, Her legs wrapped in the warm sand, she feels whole, Sitting on the shore, she longingly stares… The seas understand her best ~ yes, they do, For they let her be, free to roam and see, They don’t question her tears when she feels blue, So that’s where she goes in sadness or glee. written on 08.19.2021 posted on 08.21.2021 For Constance La France's "Writing Prompt, Oceans or Seas" contest

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Date: 8/27/2021 6:16:00 AM
Jo, beautiful, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Oceans and Seas, adore the images and the quotation ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 8/26/2021 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love the sea and this wonderful write/pictures. I love this line, "The seas understand her best ~ yes, they do," So Very True. Have a great/blessed day.................
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Date: 8/25/2021 11:01:00 PM
Such a heart felt poem dear Jo...Congrats on a top win....much love :)
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Date: 8/25/2021 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Jo. It's truly outstanding. This poems brings a calming effect on me - sending to my faves, Dear Friend. Pictures are surreal! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 8/22/2021 11:31:00 AM
This is simply outstanding. Adding to my favourites
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Date: 8/21/2021 6:04:00 AM
A soothing sight you created with this beautiful ambiance of seas.
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Date: 8/21/2021 3:41:00 AM
Such a beautiful write... Lovely imagery throughout...
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Date: 8/21/2021 1:00:00 AM
A great metaphoric write. Well done. Hugs
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