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The Calm Before

a storm is brewing
 gothic billows drape the sun-
     churning glints of jade
 jagged winds inhale; all still-
     a distant siren echoes 

        **17 Apr 20168**

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Lenny Gazbowski

May 30, 2016 at 11:04 AM

awesome tanka.

Connie Marcum Wong

May 17, 2016 at 3:44 PM

Wow David...this gave me chills! I don't know how Kelly chose. She really got some excellent entries like this one. I loved yours! Congratulations on your top placement. #7. ; )