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The Calm Before

a storm is brewing gothic billows drape the sun- churning glints of jade jagged winds inhale; all still- a distant siren echoes **17 Apr 20168**

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 5/30/2016 11:04:00 AM
awesome tanka.
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Date: 5/17/2016 3:44:00 PM
Wow David...this gave me chills! I don't know how Kelly chose. She really got some excellent entries like this one. I loved yours! Congratulations on your top placement. #7. ; )
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Date: 5/15/2016 10:58:00 PM
Congratulations David on the placement of the contest
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:51:00 PM
A great poem that leaves the reader with a calm, yet eerie feeling... I liked this a lot, David. Well done! Congrats on a win!
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Date: 4/22/2016 12:26:00 AM
David, wow, that's going to be some storm... great tanka.. LINDA
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