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The Calm After the Storm

Battered, yet relieved, I bathe in your soothing essence...healed.


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Contest: See or Feel  #7
Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A.
Placed 1st
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 7:33 PM
awesome to see this one again. CONGRATS
Callus Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 12:53 PM
Thank you Andrea:) ~ Have a lovely weekend! // paul
Dalei Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Congrats on ur win...with love.
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Thank you Manmath. Your congrats are appreciated. Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 11:10 AM
A soothingly smooth win Paul, congratulations...
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Lovely comments, Charlie! Thank you! ~ Regards // paul
Devnath  Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Always a supportive gentleman, BL...thank you!! ~ Regards // paul
A   Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Paul, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Thank you for another appreciated high placement, Linda! I'm now tempted to go watch you dancing..:) hugs // paul
Richards Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 8:12 PM
This is comforting, just reading makes one feel the healing presence !! Lovely poem, Paul !! Congrats to you!
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thank you Carrie...I love your delightful feedback:) ~ Regards // paul
Konos Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 12:09 PM
I understand they are looking for you ...as the winner of the Academy Awards for this outstanding achievement in writing ....wow...you just never exhale....brilliant.......
Callus Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Now, why do I have this feeling that wings are sprouting outa my back:)) Thank you, Judy, you're a sport! ~ Warm regards // paul
Gasun Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 6:02 AM
Hello my dear friend, Paul! It's also an honor for me to share with you the great winning dais! Warm Congratulations to you my dear friend for this very wonderful monuko and great win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, GL
Callus Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 7:04 AM
It is my pleasure to be sharing first place with you, Leonora:) Thank you for your lovely comments. Hope you're having a pleasant weekend. Big Hugs ~ paul
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 4:52 PM
hmmm, had I not seen this one yet. Anyway, seeing it now, and BIG congrats on your win
Callus Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 4:00 AM
And I also missed reading yours, Andrea!:) At the moment I'm entangled in unanswered mail!! Thank you for stopping by:) // paul
Kimathi Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 5:21 AM
Congrats Paul, on your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Callus Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Many thanks, Teddy. ~ All the best // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 7:31 AM
Beautiful! Congrats Paul.
Callus Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Thank you, Richard...glad you liked. ~ Regards // paul
Delaney Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 5:46 PM
Beautiful monoku, Paul: Congratulations on your top win. SuZ
Callus Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 1:30 PM
Pleased that you like it, Suz...thank you:) Regards // paul
Haight Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 5:41 PM
This is a wonderful interpretation, with great imagery, Paul. Nicely done, and congratulations on your First Place win! Sandra
Callus Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Thank you, Sandra; your winning entry was a joy to read, too:) Regards // paul
Pennell  Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 2:46 PM
that does paint a picture like how its takes you to the past what as been congrats
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Thank you for stopping by and commenting + the congrats, Stephen. ~ All the best. // paul
Devnath  Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 10:59 AM
Really an excellent monoku rooted in to depth of loving heart, my lovely friend. A great congrats, bl
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Many thanks, Bl, my friend. Your lovely comments are appreciated. ~ Regards // paul
Selfa Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations Paul on your wonderful win in "In one line (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL" contest. You are truly amazing! :) -hans
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Your generous comments are truly appreciated, Hansteven:) Thank you! ~ Regards // paul
A   Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Paul, it makes my day when I can make others smile. Thanks for the sweet replies.... your poems are well deserved. Linda
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Thank you, Linda; I'm pleased that you like what I write:) Sweet of you to come back:) Have a lovely day! // paul
Smith Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 5:57 AM
Congrats on a well deserved top win dear friend... This poem, tho few words, speaks volumes to my soul... Hugs.. Arlene
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 6:27 AM
I am so pleased that you like it, Arlene; it's a pleasure to have you stopping by; congrats and lovely remarks are truly appreciated. hugs // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 1:43 AM
Paul, These rocks remind me of old friends gathered, brought closer by life experiences. Your poem is a wonder and not surprising that it garnered a first placement. Congratulations on your deserving win with this beauty! #7
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 6:52 AM
I like how you interpret the picture, Connie...I feel a new poem being born from your pen there:) Thank you for the lovely feedback, congrats and high rating! ~ Warm regards // paul
Hicks Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 12:11 AM
You're on a roll there, Mr. Paul. Congratulations are in order.
Callus Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Hi Timothy...I just realized that there is no reply to your 'double' comment ... strange...I was sure that I had replied! Fun puns are enjoyable; keep them coming:) Goodnight! ~ paul
Hicks Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 12:13 AM
Rather than Rock Bottom ... you floated to the top :O Excuse the puns, I'm just having fun.
George   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 11:50 PM
A Masterpiece, Paul. Many congrats on your first place win. Elaine
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 6:25 AM
You are very generous, Elaine! Thank you for the lovely comment and congrats. Have a lovely day:) Regards // paul
Roper Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 10:21 PM
Beautiful verse :) Congratulations on your 1st place win, Paul!!!!
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 6:08 AM
Thank you, Eve. You support and encourage no end:) hugs // paul
Jameson Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 10:17 PM
A job well done, Paul. A nice piece of work my friend..congrats!
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 6:06 AM
Thank you, Sam; your entry has proved to be a worthy winner, too:) All the best // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Wow that's so beautiful Paul.. congrats on top podium.
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 6:23 AM
You wow me with your sincerity, Upma:) Thank you!! Have a nice day:) Regards // paul
A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:34 PM
Ps.... Paul, Congratulations on your awesome one line verse (monoku) what you SEE or FEEL win. It's an honor to have you support my contest once again. Stop by and enjoy my blog "Ashamed" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 5:41 AM
It's always my pleasure to take part in your contests, Linda; Thank you for the top placement...you've made my day:) hugs // paul
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