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The Caged Robin

Confined to a cage, with a wisk in his wings, he wanted to break free; he squeezed his body through rods: into the spring sky he flew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/25/2016 6:20:00 PM
Andrew, I liked this tanka so much, really wonderful, nothing like freedom, no animal should be caged ~
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Date: 5/25/2016 10:00:00 AM
fly bird...be free!! great escape :)
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Andrew Crisci
Date: 5/26/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thank you Casarah for your comment. I am glad that you liked my Tanka. Enjoy your weekend. Best Wishes, Andrew.
Date: 5/25/2016 9:31:00 AM
Lovely... Fly away little bird..
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Andrew Crisci
Date: 5/25/2016 9:38:00 AM
Good morning, Bonnie. Thank you for your kind comment. We sometimes feel like a caged bird in our confined environment, so like the little bird we must break free. Have a wonderful day. Best Wishes, Andrew.

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