The Cage

The Cage… 

The Cage… 
I am caged in a body, shackled with my pain.
One of these days, I’ll break this rusty old chain.
I will be so happy, flying in a breeze,
In the realm of light, dancing as its rain.
In the garden, I will chase the butterflies,
I will laugh, and I will play with no complain.
I will be so drunk drinking Morning Dew,
I will run with the wind, breaking my old cane.
There will be no tears, no more restless nights,
Only love will be there; not else shall remain.
Trust me, my dear, escape from your cage.
The cage, full of greed, always dies in vain.
Come with me, my friend; I know where it ends.
It is filled with our love; it’s hard to explain.
Our pain will be cured; our thirst will be quenched,
If you do not drink, you must be insane.
You will be everywhere, here and over there,
You have never again had worries or pain.
A thousand mysteries all will be child’s play,
Your knowledge will be all; all you shall obtain.
Trust “Haloo” he knows death also will pass,
The soul will be the one destined to contain.
6/23/2017    Haloo


* I named this painting " The Cage". It is acrylic on canvas.
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Bocsa Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 4:02 AM
As Charlie Chaplin took part in the big actor's imitation contest, he took third place (you can not always win, although you are a golden person). You might know the site Allpoetry where I suppose you could teach Persian poetry secrets,too. After all, it is only a poetic game with points and symbolic medals and so on , but the the real rewarding experience is that is that you may find new friends.
Salehi Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 1:12 PM
You are absolutely right...My work is always a combination of poem/painting and music all together..... Thanks again my friend. Pashang
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December 26, 2017 at 3:54 AM
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Salehi Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Thanks Ovidiu.... My website link is http://www.haloo.us/ Hope you can get something out of it.....Merry Christmas
Kendrick Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Enjoyed reading your work and seeing your painting..Escape what is not necessary is a good way to go..Thanks for the trip to my page..Sara
Salehi Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 12:12 PM
Always Sara.... thank you...
One Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 3:00 PM
An excellent write...
Salehi Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 6:37 PM
Thank you my friend... Welcome back.
Sergi Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 10:43 AM
A beautiful poetic metaphor, Pashang. I also loved your rendering.
Salehi Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 2:19 PM
Thank you Ralph....
Thirtyseven Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Great painting, and a very nice poem.
Salehi Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 3:02 PM
Thanks Scott...
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July 11, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Very truth filled poem, Pashang. Loved the rhythmic flow, and the message in the flow. An instant fave. Pure pristine poetry. May love light your path always.
Salehi Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 4:06 PM
Thank you Mr. Robinson, yours as well.....
Manassian Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 4:40 AM
Lovely...both the painting and the poem. Yes, we are caged in many different ways and we all long from freedom from what binds us. Lovely to visit you today.
Salehi Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 3:50 PM
My dear Eileen you are always welcome.... say hello to your beautiful Shereen...
Williams Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 4:47 AM
Impressive poem with a lovely painting to match. Did you paint it? I loved your words Pashang...Maria
Salehi Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 2:26 PM
Thank you Maria...
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July 3, 2017 at 9:41 AM
Hi Pashang, another excellent poem from your pen. The painting is also beautiful my friend. One day the cage shall open for us all and the greatest adventure of all shall begin. Your words sing as they always have done Pashang. Your words sing in the mind. Hugs....Mike. XX
Salehi Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 11:30 AM
Thanks Mike.... If everybody describe me as the way you do, then I'll be a millionaire in no time. Also,do you know that we look the same but you do have a lot better hair....
Roper Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 7:58 PM
Wonderful, Pashang, great poem, but where is your beautiful painting. ~*
Roper Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 3:50 PM
I see it now, beatiful ~*
Salehi Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 12:57 PM
Thanks Eve... It's there.... I can see it, maybe you should re-load.
Murray Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 6:22 AM
This afterlife of yours sounds like fun Pashang. Here's hoping.
Salehi Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 10:56 AM
Dear Jean... Matter/Energy can neither be created nor destroyed, it simply can change form. It is a scientific law! So I'll see you .....
Andresen Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:56 PM
- Impressive image with a lovely poem ... so skilled you are, Pashang ! :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 2:48 AM
Thank you my dear Anne-Lise ... your sunshine and smile is more impressive than all of my paintings combine....
Maverick Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 3:55 PM
A write that invites us to open our minds and you have done very well with word painting Pashang.'
Salehi Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Thanks Joe, sometimes I go places that even that even God does not know....
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 10:22 PM
A lovely poem with creative and impressive metaphors Pashang. : )
Salehi Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Thank you Connie.....You are too kind.
Callus Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Lovely poem, Pashang. One of these days we will all break free from these shackles. Regards // paul
Salehi Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Indeed... Thanks Paul
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June 24, 2017 at 10:22 PM
Break free and fly into paradise :) fantastic work Pashang!
Salehi Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Thanks my dear....
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2017 at 9:19 PM
this is FANTASTIC, Pashang!! what a great poem you have written. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Salehi Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 12:45 AM
Thanks Andrea... I know you enjoy Ghazal....
Turner Avatar
June 23, 2017 at 8:29 PM
At our age, pain is simply a part of life, my friend. Someday...someday... I will see you there:) I like your poem and I'll bet the painting is a masterpiece:) Tell the little lady, I said hello.
Salehi Avatar
June 23, 2017 at 8:57 PM
Until then DT... Thanks
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