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helpful honeybees had hovered hexagon homes~ haunted hives heaps high

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Date: 5/24/2019 8:16:00 PM
awesome alliteration and great illustration with your cute poem.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/24/2019 8:31:00 PM
I did a concrete and personification, now it's a, haiku and alliteration, --walking with Frost on a road less traveled, Andrea, Aloha wk
Date: 5/24/2019 11:58:00 AM
So much comes to mind when I read this, well done for a luminous 3 lines . Nice reading your poem today
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Date: 5/24/2019 12:45:00 PM
Happy to accommodate my kind friend, Aloha wk

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