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The Button

*spot poetry written in 15 minutes or less about any random subject There lay a button, 'neath the weather beaten tile, Lay in it's dust, shadowed crust, it had been there quite a while. Hopeless trust amongst the feet that scattered it abroad, It dodged and hid itself for keeps, in hopes 'twould not be trod. It kept itself a distant force, this button in the tile, I picked it up to change its pace and placed it in the pile, Of buttons in my sheltered home; 'twould be so happy there But who was I to criticize, or place it anywhere? Perhaps it was quite happy, in its home away from tacks, So I turned around, and put it down, It was happy to be back. Moral: Don't assume that changing ones' surroundings are always what THEY desire.

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Date: 11/29/2022 12:24:00 AM
Nice pace, and love the quirky tone of the poem. A pleasure to read.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 12/10/2022 8:46:00 PM
Thanks, Matt
Date: 5/1/2018 7:48:00 AM
I really like this. Very well rhymed and an interesting story about of all things a button!!! This is a FAV for me. Well done!!!
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Date: 3/9/2017 5:04:00 PM
Good moral and advice. What is that old saying, "even with the best intentions". Love the poem and the button, though a metaphor for something best left unbuttoned.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/9/2017 5:22:00 PM
lol! thx
Date: 3/9/2017 3:40:00 PM
This is a sweet tale with a lovely message, nice write Gayle! 7 in my book :) xomo
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/9/2017 5:23:00 PM
Thank youuu :)

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