The Button

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There lay a button,
'neath the weather beaten tile,
Lay in it's dust, shadowed crust,
it had been there quite a while.
Hopeless trust amongst the feet
that scattered it abroad,
It dodged and hid itself for keeps,
in hopes 'twould not be trod.
It kept itself a distant force,
this button in the tile,
I picked it up to change its pace
and placed it in the pile,
Of buttons in my sheltered home;
'twould be so happy there
But who was I to criticize, 
or place it anywhere?
Perhaps it was quite happy,
in its home away from tacks,
So I turned around,
and put it down,
It was happy to be back.

Moral: Don't assume that changing ones'
surroundings are always what THEY desire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/29/2022 12:24:00 AM
Nice pace, and love the quirky tone of the poem. A pleasure to read.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 12/10/2022 8:46:00 PM
Thanks, Matt
Date: 5/1/2018 7:48:00 AM
I really like this. Very well rhymed and an interesting story about of all things a button!!! This is a FAV for me. Well done!!!
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Date: 3/9/2017 5:04:00 PM
Good moral and advice. What is that old saying, "even with the best intentions". Love the poem and the button, though a metaphor for something best left unbuttoned.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/9/2017 5:22:00 PM
lol! thx
Date: 3/9/2017 3:40:00 PM
This is a sweet tale with a lovely message, nice write Gayle! 7 in my book :) xomo
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/9/2017 5:23:00 PM
Thank youuu :)
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