The Butterfly Princess

"Just living is not enough, said the butterfly fairy...one must have sunshine, freedom and a little flower"  Hans Christian Anderson


                     She’s the Butterfly Princess of the magical valley of fairy Kings
                 I saw her dancing with her sisters in the enchanted forest glen
             Her body of sweet nectar being sun kissed again and again
         As she fluttered about on tiptoe with her gold gossamer wings
     The woodland nymphs played a melody on lyrical harp strings

  Her dress of ethereal light all a flutter with a hundred or more
      Swooning butterflies who adorn her effervescent flowing caress
           Golden curling tendrils resplendent in a sweet flower headdress
                The iridescent undulation of swaying hips is their complete adore
                     Her gentle grace the epitome of butterflies wondrous folklore

                 They gathered all around her to lift her gown as she flew away
             To her wedding that day, a Butterfly Prince was always her ecstasy
         And their love was often said to be the kingdoms new destiny
     Around his body he wore a gently woven honeysuckle flower lei
  Amid his wings he had woven her gift of a lavender sachet

      As the trumpets did herald the Princess on soft petals she came
          All bowed to the glorious sight of their love soon to be bound
             The next time you see butterflies in the garden, turnaround
                  You may see the fairy Prince and Princess in the sun all aflame
                       Swirling and twirling about in a butterfly dancing game


written:  10-3-2019
Writing Challenge, October -Butterfly-   2nd place

Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode   Thank You so much!
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La France Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 7:25 PM
Jeanne congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem!
Mcgee Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 6:33 PM
What a great subject to wrap our heads around. Thank-you for the placement.
Allison Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Absolutely charming Jeanne, many congratulations on your win , this is truly a joy to read:-) hugs Jan xx
Mcgee Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 6:32 PM
so happy you enjoyed and thank you my friend for your kind words.
Adams Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 12:48 PM
beautiful poem, well deserving of the win, congratulations :) hugs
Mcgee Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 6:32 PM
Thanks Sandra xoxo
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:43 AM
- Congratulations Jeanne, on a great win in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcgee Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 6:31 PM
xoxo thanks
May Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 8:52 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats on your win Jeanne..
Pinet Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 9:18 AM
Jeanne, this poem is imaginative wizardry cast by a talented pen. Wonderful work my friend, Emile.
Mcgee Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 6:30 PM
Hola Emile. Thank you for such kind words. It means alot coming from one of my favorite poets here on the Soup.
Peterson Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 6:07 PM
I am really quite speechless and rendered entirely incapable of coherent response in the presence of such beauty. Had I not read it for myself, I would have thought, in fact, that such an arrangement of words was impossible. Now see what a fix you’ve left me in?
Mcgee Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:48 PM
I hope I didn't over do it. Sometimes going to the land of enchantment sweeps me away.
May Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 5:16 PM
A beautiful enchanting story Jeanne, Well written
Green Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 10:59 AM
This was an enchanting poetic story Jeanne. I enjoyed everything about this. Best wishes in the contest my friend.
Mcgee Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:46 PM
I love it when I can get my muse to go to the enchanted lands...leave the everyday behind. Thanks for coming by for a read Chris, and your kind words.
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:16 AM
- An enchanting and charming poem, Jeanne :) - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcgee Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:45 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...the week end is shaping up to be one of a kind with a hike tomorrow morning at 4am to a place called Nariz de Indio in Guatemala...I'm glad you enjoyed a bit of enchantment.
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October 4, 2019 at 2:24 AM
This is a FAV for me. Straight to my FAV list Jeanne. There are too many wonderful parts to list, and the way you typed it was exquisite!
Mcgee Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Wow Caren...what a delight to hear as I sip my coffee this morning. Thank you.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 1:14 AM
Beautiful entry. I haven't ever done this form? Not sure how it's done but I loved your poem. Bless you
Mcgee Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 7:27 AM
Hi Regina...abbaa rhyme scheme. Have a most wonderful day my poetess friend.
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