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The day I found the butterfly in me, I was changed forever to- delighted. I found dancing where I could soar carefree, the butterfly and me are so united, that we twirl and swirl blissful, we dip and fold gleeful, we fly up high cheerful, optimistic, aphoristic, spiritualistic . . . My dress is gauzy and purple feathery, with butterfly I am ignited . . entwined, we are one with wings filigree, and when we dance I am happy excited. ______________________ February 17, 2017 Poetry/Verse/The Butterfly In Me Copyright Protected, ID 17-876-943-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 3/11/2017 6:03:00 PM
I am so glad you wrote of the butterfly within you in a different way. I'll think of this poem when I have those butterflies of anxiety.
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Date: 2/20/2017 10:21:00 AM
oh to be a butterfly and find one's destiny so entire that it leaves one breathless
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Date: 2/20/2017 9:28:00 AM
Well, uplifted is a thing wonderful. May your spirit be always so. You can fly. Much credit for you is deserved. Your happiness and words bring tears of joy to my eyes. You have put together magic words of gold and silver--a royal gift to me which lightens my spirit too. Thank-you.
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Date: 2/20/2017 1:19:00 AM
This is beautiful and uplifting, Constance...I love butterflies, too! Lots of luck in the contest...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/19/2017 7:29:00 PM
How cute, Constance, the day you found the butterfly inside you. I am glad you found it!! It really suits you! SEVEN
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Date: 2/19/2017 10:31:00 AM
You and butterflys go so well together. Your poem is in the shape of a butterfly, no? I love the whole idea of this gem! A favorite...(!)
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Date: 2/18/2017 6:00:00 PM
Wonderful write a 7 and good luck in the contest :) Thank you for the congratulations on POTD was unexpected Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/18/2017 11:30:00 AM
Your creativity, superb poetic flow , depth in message and imagery always give the reader positive vibes and admiration of your truly great poetic talents! A7 AND A FINE JEWEL METHINKS..
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Constance La France
Date: 2/18/2017 1:02:00 PM
Robert thank you for that wonderful compliment and the 7
Date: 2/17/2017 11:52:00 PM
How flowing; this dazzling work makes me want to dance , constance!..huggs.. soupie!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/18/2017 7:28:00 AM
Nette Thanks for visiting my newest write and for the compliment

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