The Bus Home

Lovers huddle close.
Rain smacks the dusty pavement.
Commuters bustle,
Seeking refuge in doorways.
Diesel fumes, cigarette smoke,
Intoxicate the bus queue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 19, 2013 at 5:24 PM
this image comes to life for me...I drive a (school bus) and can so relate to much of this one...nice write :)
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