The Burning Soul

The life of crying, 
Loss harmful flames to my eyes, 
The bloodshot eyes bursting out, 
Withering soul, without love, 
Dwindling out of control, 
The life of a burning soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bell Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 5:16 AM
You depict the feeling perfectly, and there never seem to be any rainbows at the end of it.
Murray Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 5:31 AM
Thank you, life can be so dark
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