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The Bullpen Stinks Tonight

When the home team has a five to two lead, a dependable bullpen is what they need. In the ninth inning, they want three outs more. A relief pitcher has to shut the door. Losing the lead for the team is crappy. The hometown crowd will leave unhappy. Such an incident happened the other night. The events that transpired were a bizarre fright. The “closer” was expected to deliver from harm. However, he incurred spasms with his arm. Unavailable, other pitchers took the mound. Not one competent pitcher could be found. The bases became loaded before we knew it. All the runners scored, and the home team blew it. The fans were sitting there dumbfounded and staid. Six runs crossed home plate before the final out was made. Therefore, the home team lost, and that was history. Unfortunately this season, it has happened too frequently.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/4/2012 9:51:00 AM
i really like this poem a lot. it has a bit of the feeling of "casey at the bat" about it. the last 2 lines, though, don't have the perfect rhyme that the other lines have (maybe something with "mystery?"). i know i have no place trying to change your words (and i'd HATE if someone did it to me!) but the rest of the poem rhymes so beautifully it's a shame (to me) that the final couplet doesn't as well.
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Date: 3/3/2012 10:46:00 PM
Robert, you must love baseball... i like your "dumbfounded" line.. makes things look like "GEEEESSS!" well an out is an out for any team... hope they get a better manager next year.. and change their luck..always..pd
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