The Bullet Tree - From a Neighborhood Child

THE BULLET TREE

No one knows how long the bullet has been lodged in the big    old maple tree
Mr. Ailey claims he knows    but    Mr. Ailey is an old    old man
No one    till Teddy    so far as we know    ever tried to dig it out
Mr. Ailey says the growth    at last    will push it out
Ailey says    “The shot was fired at trailin’ injun’ horsemen”
He rubs the wrinkles down off his face    and says
“It was a Wells and Fargo stage    a rollin’ down what now appears yer Downin’ Street
That there tree was jist a sturdy pole when ‘Ugly Ben”    a sittin’ shot-gun fired a round
At them    them injuns”    Then old Ailey clucks his teeth
The bullet tree is just down the terrace from the deaf lady’s house
It stands on the dear lady’s property  (Mrs. Troutman)
“That there house ya see”   Ailey’s pointing with one crooked finger
“That there house useta be nuthin’ but prairie dog territory”   He coughs    spits a string
“I come huntin’ buffalo afore even that there tree was more’n a shootin’ twig
Ta git back ta Ben    Now    Ben come back one day ta see ifn he could find a shell or two
When he come upon the bullet lodged in tha tree
So he drove it in and pushed the empty shell casing in in back of it
Thet there bullet    Ya see?    Goes tat ha very heart o’ thet there tree”
Even at our age we didn’t believe half of what the old man said

Teddy tried to pry the bullet out one day
But the deaf woman crackled threats from her porch
Her voice    we thought    what a porcupine might sound like
Anyway    the deaf woman’s cackle was a bad omen    we thought

The bullet tree    at last    became a challenge
To dart    after careful observation    then
To touch the dented    weathered    circled end
Without arousing Mrs. Troutman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/12/2011 2:34:00 PM
please look at my poem for children "Giving Thanks" and give it to as many as you want, I'm listing it anonymous in publishing. its my best. thanks for your earlier comment. they help encourage, the penwell don't they? aprreciate ya, Cindy/ Lucinda / re:Journey
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Date: 9/22/2011 2:10:00 PM
enjoyed the memories embedded in this piece daver, also congratulations on your featured poem Daver.
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Date: 9/22/2011 7:11:00 AM
Quite a story here daver. I always enjoy your enthusiam and creative talent. Soup mail.
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Date: 9/20/2011 7:18:00 PM
Hello dear poet ! Little things many take for granted. As you've shown here, life is filled with many wee happenings which stir creative thought and enlighten ! Great write Dave ! Have a blessed week sir....much love, james
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Date: 9/20/2011 4:27:00 PM
what a very interesting story you have here, Daver, yup some things are just better left alone ;) Enjoyed how you wrote this as well :) -- heehee as for the name, just me being silly, playing with it ^_^ hugs to you!
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Date: 9/20/2011 4:19:00 PM
your mind works with sparling lights, daver... truly an original gem! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/20/2011 4:14:00 PM
Creative story told..Sara
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