The Building of Life

Your entering an elevator in the skyscraping building of life. As you step through the doors your uncertain of which floor is right. So you press all the buttons hoping to rely on your sight. Upon reaching the first floor look who steps in, it's your wife. Reaching the next floor, your child comes running in. You embrace them with happiness, as the doors close once again Then onto the next floor with a bunch of smiles you all go. Upon reaching the next floor another child runs in "Oh no?" Whats going on? This wasn't part of the plan? "Oh well I can take it, that's right, I'm a strong man." As you reach the next floor your wife says this is it. Exiting the elevator, your kids start to throw a fit. As you are about to exit you see your wifes hand on the door. Then she turns to you and says, "Why don't you go up one more floor" With the doors closing, you see tears in your wifes eyes. "Why would she be crying? Was she telling me goodbye?" Reaching the next floor, you decide to see what this floor is all about. This must be the right floor you sense, in your mind with out a doubt. As you turn to the elevator to go back down one floor to your wife. You see there is no down button, for the elevator in this building of life
Dan Kearley:11-30-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/16/2011 1:58:00 PM
Man! 7 all the way Dan. Rarely can a writer take you on such a vivid journey and keep it all knit-together so precise and perfect. I thoroughly freaking love this poem. 7up and a new found favorite. Thank you for sharing! WOW!
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Date: 12/13/2011 8:26:00 PM
this is really amazing of you,,,very brilliant in its creation,,,and so many meanings,,, i am just glad all floors do go up,,,,,and never go down........
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Date: 12/5/2011 7:36:00 PM
I loved the idea of this elevator on the building of life, Dan. very well written with excellent rhymes. thank you for stopping by and the well wishes.
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Date: 12/1/2011 1:52:00 PM
To all who read this... I want you to look at this a different way other then sad...I want you to think of it as....There are more floors in this building of life...Our love for the ones that get left behind or go ahead,we carry with us.Sure it can be a tug sometimes.But that is what we do in life.Give and gather the love we find.And get back on that elevator and keep going Up,Up,Up :o) I hope this helps with any sadness I may have brought to mind. :o)
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Date: 11/30/2011 6:31:00 PM
Good grief, no turning back - I loved the trip up but coming down is a sad story.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2011 7:39:00 PM
I was thinking the same thing...But then I thought...There is no comming down?It's all up,up,up.And once you reach the top it's heaven.....Perhaps?
Date: 11/30/2011 6:20:00 PM
may be time to get off the elevator? this one made me think, Dan, dig, thanks. ~N
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2011 7:42:00 PM
Ha,ha..I know what your saying.I had so many different thoughts on this poem.Thanks for stopping bye. :o)
Date: 11/30/2011 6:11:00 PM
nice...p.d.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2011 7:44:00 PM
Is it??? :o)
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