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The Buck Stopped Here

A dentist was having no luck
Because Freddie’s teeth were so buck.
Clearly braces he’d need;
Dad and mom disagreed.
Every argument left them all stuck.

Freddie’s dentist did not intervene,
Giving simple advice – “Keep them clean.”
He deserves some acclaim;
Ipso facto, the same
Jutting teeth sang the lyrics of Queen.


January 10, 2019

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Date: 1/11/2019 5:04:00 AM
This is very impressive,Ilene. Great rhythm, rhyme, content and stamina in completing a two stanza challenge! I hope like his music, this one will top the charts!
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Date: 1/10/2019 7:27:00 PM
It did indeed! Well done, Ilene! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/10/2019 4:38:00 PM
Fantastic Ilene - you nailed all the elements - the dentist, the rhyme, the rhythm, the humour and... the alphabet! You rose to the challenge with awesomeness!
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 1/10/2019 4:39:00 PM
Oh just saw the title as well... boom boom!