The Broom That Couldn'T Fly

So still, so humble, there it lay
                      Cast aside on All Saints Day
A light brown stick, a tuft of hay
                  A witch’s broom on full display

As I approached, I heard it sigh
                     If I can’t fly, what good am I
And then the broom began to cry
                You’ll never know how hard I try

To reassure, I did declare
             Perhaps, your talents lie elsewhere
So many things that you can share
                Stories that could raise your hair!

Why, you just need some confidence
   Some witch’s ointment might make sense
It seems, I have some to dispense
            Now fly my friend and no nonsense

With that, the broom let go the gloom
                      Exhibiting a wondrous plume
It thanked me and began to fume
           I’m flying now, just watch me zoom!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Elam Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Accio broom! Bravo!
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November 8, 2018 at 8:23 PM
Thanks so much Mark!!
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November 7, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Love this, Mike...Wonderful how you made us feel joyful over something as little as a broom..lol Great poem...All the best...Charlie
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November 7, 2018 at 11:54 AM
Thank you so much Charles for your kind visit and comments !!! I am happy that you liked it.
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November 4, 2018 at 6:07 AM
- It's all about preserving a positive attitude when things are difficult, Mike - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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November 4, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise xxoo
Wolf Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 9:43 PM
Unexpected, … and delightful, Mike! Such a pleasant read with a nice little 'moral to the story.' Pure enjoyment. :) gw
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November 4, 2018 at 5:38 AM
Thank you so much Gershon!!
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November 2, 2018 at 6:54 PM
What a wonderful allegory, Mike! Just like many people, this broom needed a little encouragement. Absolutely love the way your poem's meter and rhyme work so perfectly. You gave me big smiles tonight! Hugs, Carolyn
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November 2, 2018 at 7:08 PM
I’m so glad you liked it, thanks Carolyn xxoo
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November 2, 2018 at 3:37 PM
This would be perfect to enter into Jesse Rowe's Overlooked Beauty contest Mike. He wants couplets which you could easily make from this. I loved it! : )
Gentile Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Thanks Connie xxoo
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November 2, 2018 at 12:30 PM
The little broom that could... how delightfully adorable. Beautifully penned, Mike. Love it. One day we have to create an anthology for kids (kids of all ages of course).
Gentile Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Thanks Line, sometimes, we kids of all ages need some lightness xxoo Happy Friday !
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November 2, 2018 at 12:04 PM
Cleverly done--a fun read. Well done, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Thank you as always Vijay Happy Friday !!
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November 2, 2018 at 10:04 AM
After a drop of Mikes magic potion Broom was soon back up in motion. Enjoyed your humour Mike, could do with some for my car lol. Tom
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November 2, 2018 at 11:16 AM
Thanks Tom !!
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November 2, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Such a sweet fun poem Mike :) Happy Friday!
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November 2, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Thanks Heidi! and Happy Friday to you as well xxoo
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