The Brontosaurus Bop

They thought in a dance they'd engage
As they lumbered about in a rage
These two with their scales
Thrashed about with their tails
Shook the ground in this pre-human age

They be-bopped with all of their might
These beasts that were really a sight
Not known for their grace
These giants saved face
By causing each other dire fright

So into the night they would dance
A sort of behemoth romance
They made history
An unsolved mystery
And quite a bizarre circumstance!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/10/2011 8:21:00 PM
Were they doing the "Monster Mash," Deb? This is a very cute take on the contest and I wish you success. Hold fast to your diet -- I didn't really buy the Godiva Chocolates, but they were tempting! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/10/2011 2:45:00 PM
You may have started a new dance craze....the Brontosaurus Bop !!!
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Date: 4/9/2011 9:59:00 PM
a very cute little piece i really enjoyed it, i have seen movies where they are fighthing and i can see in my mind what you wrote, a very creative poem.
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Date: 4/9/2011 8:50:00 PM
A witty write dear poet, one which would go over well in one of the contest being sponsered here on the Soup members contests...I hope you entered this entertaining write...have a great night....much love, james
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Date: 4/9/2011 4:11:00 PM
I got a kick out of that line, Behemoth romance. Clever limericks. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/9/2011 4:09:00 PM
Great one that reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2011 4:08:00 PM
This is oh so cute..I love the behemoth romance..just great. BG
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