Deb Wilson Poet Limerick

The Brontosaurus Bop

They thought in a dance they'd engage
As they lumbered about in a rage
These two with their scales
Thrashed about with their tails
Shook the ground in this pre-human age

They be-bopped with all of their might
These beasts that were really a sight
Not known for their grace
These giants saved face
By causing each other dire fright

So into the night they would dance
A sort of behemoth romance
They made history
An unsolved mystery
And quite a bizarre circumstance!

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Carolyn Devonshire April 10, 2011 at 8:21 PM Were they doing the "Monster Mash," Deb? This is a very cute take on the contest and I wish you success. Hold fast to your diet -- I didn't really buy the Godiva Chocolates, but they were tempting! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards April 10, 2011 at 2:45 PM You may have started a new dance craze....the Brontosaurus Bop !!!

James Foulk April 9, 2011 at 9:59 PM a very cute little piece i really enjoyed it, i have seen movies where they are fighthing and i can see in my mind what you wrote, a very creative poem.

James Peranteau April 9, 2011 at 8:50 PM A witty write dear poet, one which would go over well in one of the contest being sponsered here on the Soup members contests...I hope you entered this entertaining write...have a great night....much love, james

Andrea Dietrich April 9, 2011 at 4:11 PM I got a kick out of that line, Behemoth romance. Clever limericks. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick April 9, 2011 at 4:09 PM Great one that reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Barbara Gorelick April 9, 2011 at 4:08 PM This is oh so cute..I love the behemoth romance..just great. BG