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The Broken-Hearted Ghost

He who stared at me

with such sweet smiling blue eyes

saw me later at college 

and let his gaze pass through me -

the ghost with a broken heart.

sad lovetanka

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Sandra Haight

October 18, 2017 at 8:49 AM

Andrea, just a small Tanka with huge imagery of a broken heart. Congrats on your Podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Gregory Richard Barden

October 17, 2017 at 10:21 PM

Best wishes and big congrats on your well-earned win, Andrea - keep up the great poetry, my friend! :-)

Constance La France

October 17, 2017 at 1:26 PM

Andrea, wonderful, congratulations on your win in my contest !

Eve Roper

October 16, 2017 at 9:10 PM

Awe, Andrea, love the write congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

October 16, 2017 at 5:01 PM

I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 2nd place win in the "Broken Hearted Poem contest ". It was well deserved-Alexis

James Inman

October 16, 2017 at 8:39 AM

This is wonderful Andrea. I really liked this.

Michael Tor

October 15, 2017 at 7:49 AM

Heartfelt Andrea...

Alexis Y.

October 14, 2017 at 8:24 PM

WOW! Andrea, This is a good entry for the contest theme. I think you did what was required and more. In a few lines you hit it out of the park. I wish you the best of luck in the contest- Alexis