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I espied her regard and deemed her depth. She requested that I "Hold this for me." I dare you, do not let it fall on earth. It's gotten loose to point at agony. The locket to my meek heart was broken. Stomped upon, as such dealt using disdain. Used amiss and bared to prime misspoken. Spoiled, as well as swindled of money gain. I flashed the largely adorable grin. She looked into my eyes and smiled softly. Her charming grin belied her truth within. "I'm different from those," said utterly. I'm a slack ocean rolling sea to sea. Now in your arms, I'll never roam again free.
4th Place Contest Winner Written: June 21, 2022 Forth Place Contest winner. One In Five Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May Chosen Theme: The Broken Locket Checked by HMS.COM / 10 Syllables per line

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Date: 7/11/2022 8:37:00 PM
A very beautiful ending. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/11/2022 5:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sotto, Nicely penned
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Date: 7/11/2022 7:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph. Appreciate you reading placing and commenting on my poem, it means a lot to me.
Date: 7/3/2022 10:59:00 AM
I preceive a love lost but found. Entriguing poem, very engaging. Bill
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Date: 6/22/2022 6:48:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Creative work. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 6/22/2022 5:52:00 AM
The broken locket invokes memories. I gather this is a tale of lost love and love found.
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Date: 6/22/2022 12:36:00 AM
Wonderful poem, enjoyed reading.
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