The Broken Link

On sleepless nights I am led
To creep and kneel by your bed
To pray for your mother and me
But grief comes calling you see
Gurgling from its endless base
It explodes out of my face
I shower your pillow with tears
Gagging on primal fears
Barking and spitting his rage
The monster howls from its cage
Backing me out to the edge
Of insanity's slippery ledge

The cord is severed I think
That unseen biological link
Has ripped loose down at the loins
And the wound bleeds from my groin
Like frayed rope snapping on a boat
The mangled end quivers and floats
Out in an endless abyss
Where my demons cackle and hiss
I rant, I plead and I pray
Still you keep drifting away
Hold on, I am with you my son
So tired, let go, it is done
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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A   Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Awesome win....Linda
A  Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Tim, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Puddifoot Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 7:24 PM
this is surely one of the best poems of yours, dear man; so heartfelt, arresting and hard-hitting - they always are when one is writing from the depths of heart and soul - congrats on your well deserved win in the contest x
A. Sharma Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 2:25 AM
Wonderful write Tim! Congrats on superb win!
Godwin Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 4:35 PM
Oh, all I feel is sad. How can I drop an upbeat congratulations after reading such heartbreak? I am so sorry, Tim, for what you and your family went through. It doesn't matter that your poem is beautiful when I doubt it eases anything. I am sorry I have said nothing uplifting, it is just so much of so much ... CayCay
Ryerson Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 4:46 PM
You have said a LOT that is uplifting just by offering such a beautiful and understanding comment CayCay...Thank you SO much for your kindness - Tim
Negron Flores Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations.
A  Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 3:25 PM
It's like you can write about anything my friend
Lamoureux Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 5:52 PM
At some point the cord must be severed, he is fortunate to have a dad who loves him so deeply.
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 5:33 PM
Congratulations Tim. Wonderful poem...Donna
Essence Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 6:54 PM
Congratulations on your win:)
A   Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 5:56 PM
Hello Tim, . your poem is amazing AGAIN! I love it;-)! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA
A   Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 10:06 PM
TIM, still congratulating all my sisters past contest. . Now I'm on the poets favorite poem contest.. I'm actually amazed with all these poems. I see why they are chosen as a favorite poem by other poets...a Super Congratulations here. I think I agreed with all the winners in this contest... love~PD
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 1:09 PM
Congratulations on your win in SKAT's "Members Favorite Poem" contest Tim. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 5:00 AM
Tim, a belated congrats on your win..David
Taylor Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 7:26 PM
Awesome, Tim. Congrats. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph
Rozario Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 10:01 AM
Oh this is awesome...a great write...many congrats on your win.
Gooden Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 8:33 AM
Congrats!
Guzzi Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Very powerful, I think its trying to be a couplet form. See Soup mail Light & Love
Dufresne Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 5:43 AM
This poem shows your heart and genius, Tim. Inspiring, Grippingly tender and hauntingly explicit. Into my favs-Robert
Brown Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Tim. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
George   Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 11:08 PM
Dear Tim, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
Sheart Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 9:49 AM
Tim my friend, Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
Strand Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 12:49 AM
Congrats on your first round contest success Tim.Rgds Brian
Fraser Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 11:24 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Tim >> James
Sheart Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 7:25 PM
Hi Tim, congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty
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