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The Broken Hedge

When dreams lack resources When someone invisibly forces you to completely refrain!!! When nothing can help you regain It's right to break the hedge, the barrier across your success verge... When differences shape borders When belief thickens terror When being inhumane is rot Even then if people stay sot It's right to break the hedge, the divisions to remind them our pledge... When habits impose worst vicissitudes When malice lingers in your attitude When your self becomes foe unfulfilled remains our vow It's right to break the hedge, this self arranged vicious edge...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/15/2015 6:50:00 PM
RUPHEN, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Ruphen Johny
Date: 4/23/2015 10:23:00 AM
hi SKAT !! I thank you for all the love... I'm loving PS, especially because of soupers like you who greatly encourage newbies.Love to be a friend of yours :-)
Date: 4/15/2015 7:25:00 AM
- I wish you Ruphen and your first poem here at the P Soup welcome - Always nice with new "poet" friends - Good luck, looking forward to many more poems in the future - // Anne-Lise :)
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Ruphen Johny
Date: 4/23/2015 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Anne... :-D
Date: 4/11/2015 9:57:00 PM
you are welcome
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Date: 4/8/2015 11:58:00 AM
Ruphen, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Ruphen Johny
Date: 4/11/2015 6:13:00 AM
Thank you Linda :-)
Date: 4/7/2015 10:41:00 AM
i really njoyed reading this!!! its really a wise message...
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