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the brilliant sun

the brilliant sun
sending down cold rain
waves getting washed
umbrella protects
walking staying dry

rainsunupliftingwaterweathertanka

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Hilda Greenhough

January 13, 2025 at 5:22 PM

A good tanka. I'm glad you had an umbrella.

Paula Goldsmith

January 14, 2025 at 9:32 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed "the brilliant sun" write. An umbrella is great in the rain with no wind. I enjoyed writing this one for the picture contest. Have A Blessed Day.................

Sotto Poet

January 13, 2025 at 5:13 PM

You have written beautiful poetry, dear Paula, using the tanka form and the glorious sunshine as its inspiration.

Paula Goldsmith

January 14, 2025 at 9:30 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed "the brilliant sun" write. I enjoyed writing this one for the picture contest. Have A Blessed Day.................

Sam Kauffman

January 9, 2025 at 10:22 AM

Hi Paula! Happy New Year. I love the way you bring out the opposites in the picture - sun/rain; wet/dry; cold/warm. Blessings of health and happiness to you for 2025! We are, indeed, praying for rain especially in SoCal! My cousin lives near Altadena in an historic home. We are sending prayers for all involved and all in danger along with first responders!

Paula Goldsmith

January 10, 2025 at 8:34 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed "the brilliant sun" write. I hope you have a great/blessed New Year 2025. I also hope your cousin will be OK. Yes, they need God's help. Have A Blessed Day/Weekend.................

Panagiota Romios

January 8, 2025 at 6:46 PM

Very cool creation Paula. AND Send all raindrops to southern California. Five cities are on fire! The latest one in Eaton.CA, destroyed 10,000 acres.

Paula Goldsmith

January 9, 2025 at 7:48 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed "the brilliant sun" write. I wish I could send you rain. If I could, I would. God please bless them. This is for a "picture contest." Have A Blessed Day.................

Jennifer Proxenos

January 8, 2025 at 7:24 AM

Tanka form and brilliant sunshine, brings about excellent poem - well penned my dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith

January 8, 2025 at 9:04 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found "the brilliant sun" write to be well penned. I enjoyed writing this for a "picture contest." Hugs... Have A Blessed Day.................

Joseph P. DiMino

January 6, 2025 at 6:05 PM

Very visual, Paula; I like driving in the rain on quiet evenings. A special serene.

Paula Goldsmith

January 7, 2025 at 10:32 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed "the brilliant sun" write. This is for a picture contest. I love hearing the rain. I find peace in it. Have A Blessed Day.................

Heidi Sands

January 6, 2025 at 12:38 PM

Great poem Paula. Creative. I enjoyed this :) hugs

Paula Goldsmith

January 7, 2025 at 10:30 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found "the brilliant sun" write to be a Great poem. This is for a picture contest." Hugs... Have A Blessed Day.................

Ink Empress

January 6, 2025 at 10:30 AM

Dear paula, beautiful tanka this is, youve described the picture so well here in few syllables! Umbrella protects yes from cold rain that sometimes the sun too showers upon us! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always! Hope 2025 is treating you and your loved ones well! Always a pleasure reading your work

Paula Goldsmith

January 6, 2025 at 11:25 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found "the brilliant sun" write to be a beautiful tanka. I wrote a Dear Reader as a holiday card to my readers. Hope you found it in your days off. 2025 did not start of good but is getting better. Thank God.. You put a smile on my heart when you say, "Always a pleasure reading your work." A Huge Thanks... Have A Blessed Day/Week.................

Hilda Greenhough

January 5, 2025 at 9:06 PM

This is spot on. Sun is part of water because of evaporation, and then sun helps dry the air. I see a look at science in this poem.

Paula Goldsmith

January 6, 2025 at 9:33 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed "the brilliant sun" write. This is for a picture contest. Never thought about the science in this write. Yes, guess you are right. Have A Blessed New Year 2025 writing away.................

Andrea Dietrich

January 5, 2025 at 8:04 PM

Nicely done, Paula. Good luck in the contest

Paula Goldsmith

January 6, 2025 at 9:30 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you found "the brilliant sun" write to be Nicely done. I enjoyed writing this one. Have A Blessed New Year 2025 writing away.................

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 5, 2025 at 12:00 PM

- Good to have a protective umbrella ... great written, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely new winter week :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

January 6, 2025 at 9:28 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed "the brilliant sun" write. Yes, we need a protective umbrella on rainy days. Hugs... Stay warm/dry.... Have A Blessed New Year 2025 writing away.................

John Read

January 5, 2025 at 9:31 AM

Hi Paula, the only weather I'm not fond of, is high winds, they are so destructive. xx

Paula Goldsmith

January 5, 2025 at 9:44 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed "the brilliant sun" write. This is for a picture contest. Yes, I am also not fond of high winds or real bad storms. They can be so very destructive. Hope you are OK... Have A Blessed New Year 2025 writing away.................

Paula Goldsmith

January 5, 2025 at 8:47 AM

the brilliant sun~Date Written:1/5/2025~"Written By Human Poet"

the brilliant sun

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