The Bright Sun Beams Down

the bright sun beams down

   out of an azure blue sky

     ....the frost starts to melt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 9:03 AM
Especially lovely as Spring declares Francine....:)
Pettit Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 3:55 PM
Some days, the bright sun beams down, but it is still too cold for me outside. Good example of a haiku.
Onclaud Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 8:16 PM
winter is dtrating to beg off.. a lovely 'ku and tribute to a season, francine.. :) nette
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