The Bridge

I crossed over the bridge as it fell down.
Stranded all alone away from my home.
Sadly left stuck on the wrong side of town.

I felt overwhelmed and chilled to the bone.
I chose to cross over what a mistake!
Stranded all alone away from my home.

The bridge in shambles dropped into the lake.
Forcing me to keep on moving ahead.
I chose to cross over what a mistake.

The sign up ahead said land of the dead.
Long skeleton fingers grabbed me by the throat!
Forcing me to keep on moving ahead.

As I was led the skeleton sang a note
"I have me some flesh to add to me frame."
Long skeleton fingers held me by the throat.

From out of the darkness came a blue flame.
A brilliant color still I felt no heat.
"I have me some flesh to add to me frame."

The skeleton had someone for me to meet.
Flames rose from his body into the sky.
A brilliant color still I felt no heat.

"You came to my land I must ask why?"
He waited for me as I tried to speak.
Flames rose from his body into the sky.

"All I wanted was to take a quick peek."
"Now that you've seen it would you like to stay?"
He waited for me as I tried to speak.

I said "no disrespect but the answer's no way.
With that a tremendous city was revealed!
"Now that you've seen it would you like to stay?"

At his feet a great mutitude was kneeled.
With that a tremendous city was revealed.
I crossed over the bridge as it fell down.
It appears I've found the right side of town!

Deb Wilson's Crossing "That Bridge Contest."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 2:38 PM
A very chilling tale! I loved the vivid imagery, as well! Congratulations on your win, Richard!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 2:58 PM
My pleasure Kelly.
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November 7, 2013 at 10:55 PM
Richard, ,a beautiful winning poem. Enjoyed reading every crossing bridge win. Hugs ~ SKAT ~
Lamoureux Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 2:58 PM
Thanks SKAT
Bauer Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 10:13 AM
what an interesting poem! i thoroughly enjoyed it...
Lamoureux Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 10:58 AM
Thanks Ilene
Lamoureux Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 8:53 AM
Thanks to all for congratulations.
May Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 8:29 AM
congrats on a fine win Richard
Bantawa Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 5:08 AM
a nice poem, congrats on your placement.
Posey Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 4:46 AM
Creative and a most enjoyable read.. Congratulations..... Jake
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:35 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest of Deb, Richard
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November 6, 2013 at 6:51 PM
RICHARD, , Congratulations on your Crossing That Bridge win.... always & forever :) LINDA
Sirak Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 8:48 AM
I think you are definitely on the right side and it shows with every word you write
Lamoureux Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 8:54 AM
What a nice thing to say Monterey!
Manassian Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Hi Richard....glad you still have time to write...You'll always be on the right side....always...hugs...PS...pls change sung to sang...simple past....thanks....Also...right under it...take an o from the too...only cause I care.... ;-)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 8:45 AM
Thanks Eileen, I hadn't had a chance to proof it so this is much appreciated.
Manassian Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 8:18 AM
Good luck in the contest....yea for terzanelle....I've missed it....
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 10:55 PM
At the end you have created a very solemn picture of crossing the bridge, Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 7:49 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram
Seal Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 8:50 PM
I think that bridge collapsed because far to many people waver on it Rick lol. I know, it's a metaphorical bridge that's open to all if they desire to use it. Till then they're stuck on the wrong side of town. Good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 7:51 AM
I like your reflective thought Richard.
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