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The Bride's Bouquet

Proudly, she carried white carnations and delicate pink roses,
their sweet aroma emanated from her romantic bridal bouquet.
Entwined in the blooms were crystals that would sparkle in poses
of photographs soon to be taken on this,  her wedding day.

They'd met when teens, and he was smitten upon first glance
by the twinkle in her eyes and the smile she sent his way.
He gave her white carnations at their first high school dance,
pink roses he presented when she starred in the Senior play.

The crystals were a necklace, worn by her mother, as a bride
It was a way of honoring her loving memory on this occasion
A gift that morning from her father, brought tears in a flood tide
He thought she'd want to carry them; she needed no persuasion

The aisle was lined with petals; pink roses and white carnations,
swept along as she walked, by the train of her alencon lace gown.
They stood, exchanging wedding bands and love's declarations.
On her head she wore carnations and roses, fashioned in a crown.


@10~4~2017@
Roses and Carnations
Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:17 PM
This is wonderful - love it! Congratulations on your well-earned win in Julie's contest, Lin - keep up the great writing! :-)
Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 2:10 AM
Congratulations Lin lane ,,
Lane Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Thank you.
Ashley Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Congratulations Lin on your win with this sentimental and romantic write.
Lane Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Thanks, Susan.
La France Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 7:26 PM
Lin, congratulations on your win with this lovely write !
Lane Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Thanks a lot.
Haight Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 2:34 PM
Beautiful, Lin. Congratulations on your First Place win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Thanks ever so much, Sandra.
Parker Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 12:05 PM
congratulations on a first place win with this well-deserved poem, Lin
Lane Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Thank you kindly, Frederic.
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October 11, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Congrats on your top win, Lin!
Lane Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Thanks a lot, Dale.
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 6:09 AM
I knew this would be a top place winner Lin!!! many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 6:21 AM
Thank you very much, Jan.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Lin. VN 99c
Lane Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 6:21 AM
Thank you, Subimal...and well done to you, too.
Sivey Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 6:44 AM
This is such a romantic write my friend! It is so beautiful and filled with sentimentality! I really loved the picture that pertains to the poem, with white carnations and pink roses! While pink roses are pretty, the aren't my favorite, I do like white carnations though, they are quite wondrous...like your poem! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!
Lane Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 6:20 AM
Thank you, Russell.
Gentile Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 11:41 AM
This so sweet, Lin, I especially like the aisle lines with petals... Good Luck!
Lane Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 6:20 AM
Thank you, Mike.
Smith Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Very beautiful...the perfect scene for such a tantamount event.
Lane Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 6:20 AM
Thanks a lot, Tim.
Hoffman Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 8:01 PM
Awesome imagery in this beautiful wedding write! Good luck in the contest Lin!~Che :)
Lane Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Thank you, Cheryl.
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 5:17 PM
absolutely beautiful imagery Lin i can picture it so vividly, I especially love the thought of the crystals being in her bouquet i can imagine this happening for real:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 7:27 PM
You're a romantic like I am, Jan. Thanks for liking this one.
Bauer Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 5:17 PM
beautiful words and impeccable rhyme, lin! this is an absolutely gorgeous poem...
Lane Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Thanks for such wonderful comments, Ilene. They're always appreciated.
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