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I’ve dreamed of getting married since I was a little girl Now the day has finally come and my head is in a whirl! Our friends and family are all here to see us wed My Mum has the biggest hat sitting on her head! Today’s our wedding day and our married life will start I give you all my love and you’ll always be in my heart You’ve placed a gold wedding band here on my left hand I know I am the luckiest lady in the whole of the land In our life together will have days that are good and bad I’ll try my best to wear a smile and try not to get too sad But I won’t obey you Dave, I have a strong will of my own So don’t bother trying, or you’ll hear me moan and groan! We stand together side by side as husband and wife Today has got to be the happiest day ever in my life The Bride to her Future Groom Contest Contest sponsored by Shadow Hamilton 10-02-17

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Date: 10/9/2017 12:10:00 AM
A lovely bit of humor in yours Jan. I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 10/10/2017 4:36:00 PM
Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/8/2017 3:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Jan.
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Date: 10/10/2017 4:36:00 PM
Thanks Gregory:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/7/2017 8:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan, you always have a way to make me smile even on a serious write ... : ) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/10/2017 4:37:00 PM
Shadow said her daughter had a GSOH so I thought I would add a little humour:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/7/2017 12:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jan!
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Date: 10/7/2017 12:39:00 PM
Thanks Dale I'm delighted to be on the list:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/3/2017 5:23:00 PM
"I'll try my best to wear a smile and try not to get too sad" good advice for all. Nicely done, Jan.
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Date: 10/7/2017 12:17:00 PM
Many thanks John, life isn't a bed of roses and I know I paint on a smile and i'm sure many other folks do too:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/2/2017 3:08:00 PM
Beautiful! I love the way you brandished and harness each word with dexterity. No doubt a great poem. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 10/2/2017 4:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Adeniji:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/2/2017 3:06:00 PM
- A happy day, that should never be forgotten - Lovely written, Jan - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2017 4:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/2/2017 2:33:00 PM
Wonderful write Jan..best wishes
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/2/2017 2:38:00 PM
I'm not sure if its what Shadow is after as its quite a simple poem but I gave it a go for the contest:-) hugs jan xx

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