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The Bride On the Wait List

The Bride on the wait List
Break gentle heart break
That I cannot withstand anymore
Shaking as same as an earth quake
As slow as a snail wakes and calls them whore
Here-in shoulders hands like a perfectionist

To leave and watch her sob
Wanders as blind as a bat
Attending to nowhere step by step
Thinking they call her ****
Runs down step and stumble on an out sleep
Finds time to persevere like in the book of job

And meets her best groom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/20/2025 4:54:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/23/2016 10:13:00 PM
MASEREKA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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