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The Breeze Lifts My Spirits

Roses look redder Sunflowers sunnier Chrysanthemums brighter Queen Anne's lace whiter Leaves waving like pennants Puffy clouds sail along Grass green and refreshed Birds sing their song The breeze lifts my spirits One click saves and submits it

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Date: 6/27/2022 4:30:00 PM
lol…the last line! Love your uplifting poem!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2022 5:17:00 PM
That last line seems to have clicked with a number of Soupers. Thanks, Kim. ~ Sue B. Mitt
Date: 6/26/2022 9:21:00 PM
Your poem has lifted my spirits too :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2022 5:14:00 PM
Good. I can now put 'Lifting Spirits' on my resume. Smiles, gw
Date: 6/26/2022 9:04:00 PM
You had me going there, Gershon! I loved the surprise ending. :D
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2022 5:11:00 PM
I got the idea for 'one click' from Dorothy... Toto, too. ~ Auntie Em

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