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The Breeze Lifts My Spirits 

Roses look redder
     Sunflowers sunnier
   Chrysanthemums brighter
     Queen Anne's lace whiter

   Leaves waving like pennants
     Puffy clouds sail along
   Grass green and refreshed
     Birds sing their song

   The breeze lifts my spirits
     One click saves and submits it

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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2022 4:30:00 PM
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lol…the last line! Love your uplifting poem!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2022 5:17:00 PM
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That last line seems to have clicked with a number of Soupers. Thanks, Kim. ~ Sue B. Mitt
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Valsa George
Date: 6/26/2022 9:21:00 PM
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Your poem has lifted my spirits too :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2022 5:14:00 PM
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Good. I can now put 'Lifting Spirits' on my resume. Smiles, gw
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/26/2022 9:04:00 PM
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You had me going there, Gershon! I loved the surprise ending. :D
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2022 5:11:00 PM
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I got the idea for 'one click' from Dorothy... Toto, too. ~ Auntie Em

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