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The Breeze Lifts My Spirits

Roses look redder
     Sunflowers sunnier
   Chrysanthemums brighter
     Queen Anne's lace whiter

   Leaves waving like pennants
     Puffy clouds sail along
   Grass green and refreshed
     Birds sing their song

   The breeze lifts my spirits
     One click saves and submits it
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Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2022 at 4:30 PM
lol…the last line! Love your uplifting poem!
Wolf Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 5:17 PM
That last line seems to have clicked with a number of Soupers. Thanks, Kim. ~ Sue B. Mitt
George Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 9:21 PM
Your poem has lifted my spirits too :)
Wolf Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 5:14 PM
Good. I can now put 'Lifting Spirits' on my resume. Smiles, gw
Buehler Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 9:04 PM
You had me going there, Gershon! I loved the surprise ending. :D
Wolf Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 5:11 PM
I got the idea for 'one click' from Dorothy... Toto, too. ~ Auntie Em
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