the breath of forgiveness

the breath of forgiveness
.
 some say the music still plays
 in the empty doorway, shaded with time
 past an eternity of yesterdays
 and melodic songs with words that rhyme
 .
 only in silence can you hope to hear
 the forgotten songs that used to play
 while harshly made noises of a foregone year
 chase the sad gospel songs away
 .
 i see a badly peeling wall 
 with faded red bricks crumbling into dust
 and an old man who once answered the call
 whose ministry died when exchanged for lust
 .
 i felt a song begging for time
 to be released into the waiting air
 back into the heavens on a spiral climb
 whispering for grace and mercy as a pair
 .
 in time all singers have surely died
 all songs returned to their pillow clouds
 with the purest music buried deep inside
 where vagrant noise is never allowed
 .
 'til now the lonely cry of music's death 
 rests upon six waiting guitar strings
 while the song has taken its final breath
 and in heaven, a host of angels sing
.
.
© tolbert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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