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The Break of Day

daybreak grounds me the horizon blushes an end to night's passion as the dawn unfolds my dreams it seems you own my mind all my thoughts tumble like autumn leaves in winded breaths whispered through darkness i dance gracefully in memories of you blushed with a desire i cannot explain and linger in the afterthoughts as day breaks

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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 7/16/2015 11:44:00 PM

Thoughts tumble like autumn leaves' wow creative metaphor throughout. U should be writing more with such talent. Kudos.

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/17/2014 7:55:00 PM

Deep psychology expressed in the warmest and prettiest of ways. I like your word choices Sandra, beautifully clear. This is very rich honesty. J.A.B.

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/17/2014 7:57:00 PM

Me FAV. this, because I experience this true now in my life.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2013 1:10:00 AM

by the way, I saw a beautiful sunset in Oregon!! I just love both ends of the spectrum, from sunrise to sunset.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/1/2013 8:22:00 AM

me too, sunrises and sunsets are so beautiful :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2013 1:09:00 AM

this is typically GORGEOUS. Hey, Sandy, your avatar really stands out! It's very cool. I have messages for you in your email!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/1/2013 8:22:00 AM

got your messages, thanks...hugs :)

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 11/29/2013 10:48:00 PM

A thought provoking poem sandra soooo inspiring.kudos! I will be adding a year on dec 1st. Love alwaz, Based On Belief

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/1/2013 8:21:00 AM

thank you :) today is your birthday?

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/29/2013 8:51:00 PM

This is a true beauty. Dawn poems are by far my favorites and I have added this one to mine to re-read. Thanks for all your recent visits to my page. I am swamped these past few weeks and December is so busy with sending cards and all the holiday business. take care.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2013 10:04:00 PM

Wow Thanks Suz...I am blessed to see the dawn most mornings and it inspires some decent poems at times you take care as well... hugs :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 11/29/2013 4:47:00 PM

Hi Sandra, A loving melodic write from you.. Ken

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2013 10:03:00 PM

thank you Ken :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/29/2013 10:30:00 AM

amazing beautifully penned pictured piece

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2013 10:02:00 PM

thank you Liam :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2013 9:55:00 AM

Stunning piece, I am impressed.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2013 9:59:00 PM

thank you Richard.... hugs :)

Sarai Virden

Date: 11/29/2013 1:31:00 AM

Oh my... The entire 2nd stanza is stunning! My what a talented lady you are, so thankful to have the honor of being touched by your gift. More, more, more my friend :-)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2013 9:59:00 PM

Thank you my friend :) hugs

Mark Peterson

Date: 11/28/2013 6:49:00 PM

This is so elegant and totally disarmed me. So many favorite phrases, but how about "I dance gracefully in memories of you." Altogether marvelous and memorable.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2013 9:54:00 PM

thank you Mark :)