Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

The Break of Day

daybreak grounds me
the horizon blushes
an end to night's passion
as the dawn unfolds my dreams

it seems
you own my mind
all my thoughts tumble
like autumn leaves
in winded breaths
whispered through darkness

i dance gracefully 
in memories of you
blushed with a desire
i cannot explain
and linger
in the afterthoughts
as day breaks

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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri July 16, 2015 at 11:44 PM Thoughts tumble like autumn leaves' wow creative metaphor throughout. U should be writing more with such talent. Kudos.

Justin Bordner May 17, 2014 at 7:55 PM Deep psychology expressed in the warmest and prettiest of ways. I like your word choices Sandra, beautifully clear. This is very rich honesty. J.A.B. Justin Bordner May 17, 2014 at 7:57 PM Me FAV. this, because I experience this true now in my life.

Andrea Dietrich November 30, 2013 at 1:10 AM by the way, I saw a beautiful sunset in Oregon!! I just love both ends of the spectrum, from sunrise to sunset. Sandra Adams December 1, 2013 at 8:22 AM me too, sunrises and sunsets are so beautiful :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich November 30, 2013 at 1:09 AM this is typically GORGEOUS. Hey, Sandy, your avatar really stands out! It's very cool. I have messages for you in your email! Sandra Adams December 1, 2013 at 8:22 AM got your messages, thanks...hugs :)

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu November 29, 2013 at 10:48 PM A thought provoking poem sandra soooo inspiring.kudos! I will be adding a year on dec 1st. Love alwaz, Based On Belief Sandra Adams December 1, 2013 at 8:21 AM thank you :) today is your birthday?

Suzanne Delaney November 29, 2013 at 8:51 PM This is a true beauty. Dawn poems are by far my favorites and I have added this one to mine to re-read. Thanks for all your recent visits to my page. I am swamped these past few weeks and December is so busy with sending cards and all the holiday business. take care. Sandra Adams November 29, 2013 at 10:04 PM Wow Thanks Suz...I am blessed to see the dawn most mornings and it inspires some decent poems at times you take care as well... hugs :)

Ken Carroll November 29, 2013 at 4:47 PM Hi Sandra, A loving melodic write from you.. Ken Sandra Adams November 29, 2013 at 10:03 PM thank you Ken :)

Liam Mcdaid November 29, 2013 at 10:30 AM amazing beautifully penned pictured piece Sandra Adams November 29, 2013 at 10:02 PM thank you Liam :)

Richard Lamoureux November 29, 2013 at 9:55 AM Stunning piece, I am impressed. Sandra Adams November 29, 2013 at 9:59 PM thank you Richard.... hugs :)

Sarai Virden November 29, 2013 at 1:31 AM Oh my... The entire 2nd stanza is stunning! My what a talented lady you are, so thankful to have the honor of being touched by your gift. More, more, more my friend :-) Sandra Adams November 29, 2013 at 9:59 PM Thank you my friend :) hugs

Mark Peterson November 28, 2013 at 6:49 PM This is so elegant and totally disarmed me. So many favorite phrases, but how about "I dance gracefully in memories of you." Altogether marvelous and memorable. Sandra Adams November 29, 2013 at 9:54 PM thank you Mark :)

Shadow Hamilton November 28, 2013 at 5:56 PM lovely Sandra very dreamy Shadow x smile hug Sandra Adams November 29, 2013 at 9:52 PM Thank you Shadow,,,,hugs

Chuck Melugin November 28, 2013 at 12:41 PM Great Poem, Sandra! Sandra Adams November 28, 2013 at 1:21 PM Thank you Chuck :)

Carrie Richards November 28, 2013 at 9:50 AM There is a melancholy flair in the air of this breathless beauty.......rather sad, but beautiful. Sandra Adams November 28, 2013 at 1:20 PM Thank you Carrie...hope you are enjoying this wonderful day :) hugs

Dr.Ram Mehta November 28, 2013 at 8:55 AM I enjoyed the break of the day. Sandra. I wrote a poem under the same title long back but quite different one. Sandra Adams November 28, 2013 at 1:19 PM thank you Dr Ram...I will have to come and find yours :)