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The Breach

Hawk lands on friendship branch,
Betwixt two oaks, embracing hands.
Its breach cannot provoke an avalanche.
Sturdy and tight, their friendship stands.

1/17/2023

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2023

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Victor Buhagiar

January 18, 2023 at 2:30 AM

I wish I could imagine that scene. Must be beautiful.

Caren Krutsinger

January 18, 2023 at 2:25 AM

I like thinking of this friendship.

January 17, 2023 at 7:54 PM

The hawk... could only gawk. ~ Gw

January 17, 2023 at 8:22 PM

:)

Joseph P. DiMino

January 17, 2023 at 3:35 PM

The caw of a hawk, nailed to the air. They are magnificent flights. Love your poem.

January 17, 2023 at 5:50 PM

Thank you, Joe!

January 17, 2023 at 2:33 PM

If humans could be like this also...

January 17, 2023 at 5:50 PM

Yes! So true.

January 17, 2023 at 11:38 AM

Well done, Kim. Through your lyrical artwork, I can make out your magnificent hawk perched in between the two oaks.

January 17, 2023 at 5:51 PM

Thank you, Lasaad!

January 17, 2023 at 10:12 AM

I see the hawk between two oaks through your poetic painting. Well done, Kim.

January 17, 2023 at 11:24 AM

Thanks! Those hawks are amazing!

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