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The Breach

Hawk lands on friendship branch, Betwixt two oaks, embracing hands. Its breach cannot provoke an avalanche. Sturdy and tight, their friendship stands. 1/17/2023

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Date: 1/18/2023 2:30:00 AM
I wish I could imagine that scene. Must be beautiful.
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Date: 1/18/2023 2:25:00 AM
I like thinking of this friendship.
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Date: 1/17/2023 7:54:00 PM
The hawk... could only gawk. ~ Gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 8:22:00 PM
:)
Date: 1/17/2023 3:35:00 PM
The caw of a hawk, nailed to the air. They are magnificent flights. Love your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 5:50:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 1/17/2023 2:33:00 PM
If humans could be like this also...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 5:50:00 PM
Yes! So true.
Date: 1/17/2023 11:38:00 AM
Well done, Kim. Through your lyrical artwork, I can make out your magnificent hawk perched in between the two oaks.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 1/17/2023 10:12:00 AM
I see the hawk between two oaks through your poetic painting. Well done, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 11:24:00 AM
Thanks! Those hawks are amazing!

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