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The Breach

The breach of the men and the boys. The ladies despair of such joys. What flies off their tongue. The phlegm, it is flung. Both spit with an “ach” sort of noise. 3/1/2022 A New Bawdy or Humorous Limerick Poetry Contest Tania Kitchin HMS 88558

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Date: 3/7/2022 4:30:00 PM
Kim, a great limerick about a sound I never liked, congratulations on your first place win, very creative!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/7/2022 8:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tania!
Date: 3/6/2022 11:04:00 AM
Boys WILL be boys. Good one, Kim, and Congrats for a number one win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2022 12:07:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 3/6/2022 7:16:00 AM
I see First Place congratulations are in order for you, too, Kim! Well written limerick!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2022 12:09:00 PM
Thank you, Jenna!
Date: 3/6/2022 6:21:00 AM
Snorting horny toads! Why so much hate? // Of spit options, there’s hardly a spate // to blast a snot rocket? // snot rag in the pocket? // the alternatives, not really great!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2022 12:09:00 PM
lol…Jeff
Date: 3/6/2022 5:43:00 AM
Great elucidation with a strong puch. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2022 5:53:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 3/3/2022 10:41:00 AM
Oh ouch! I can barely read it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2022 5:43:00 AM
LOL! I saw 2 different guys doing this in the park and thought how men and boys just love to spit.
Date: 3/2/2022 11:03:00 AM
Nice one! Aloha!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/2/2022 12:38:00 PM
Thank you, Rico, and for your comment!

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