Kim Rodrigues Poet Limerick

The Breach

The breach of the men and the boys.
The ladies despair of such joys.
What flies off their tongue.
The phlegm, it is flung.
Both spit with an “ach” sort of noise.

3/1/2022
A New Bawdy or Humorous Limerick Poetry Contest
Tania Kitchin
HMS 88558

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Tania Kitchin March 7, 2022 at 4:30 PM Kim, a great limerick about a sound I never liked, congratulations on your first place win, very creative! Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2022 at 8:37 PM Thank you so much, Tania!

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2022 at 11:04 AM Boys WILL be boys. Good one, Kim, and Congrats for a number one win. Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2022 at 12:07 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Jenna Logan March 6, 2022 at 7:16 AM I see First Place congratulations are in order for you, too, Kim! Well written limerick! Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2022 at 12:09 PM Thank you, Jenna!

Jeff Kyser March 6, 2022 at 6:21 AM Snorting horny toads! Why so much hate? // Of spit options, there’s hardly a spate // to blast a snot rocket? // snot rag in the pocket? // the alternatives, not really great! Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2022 at 12:09 PM lol…Jeff

Christuraj Alex March 6, 2022 at 5:43 AM Great elucidation with a strong puch. Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2022 at 5:53 AM Thank you, Christuraj!

Caren Krutsinger March 3, 2022 at 10:41 AM Oh ouch! I can barely read it. Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2022 at 5:43 AM LOL! I saw 2 different guys doing this in the park and thought how men and boys just love to spit.

Rico Leffanta March 2, 2022 at 11:03 AM Nice one! Aloha! Kim Rodrigues March 2, 2022 at 12:38 PM Thank you, Rico, and for your comment!