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The Bottom of New Life

Drowning.....From the surface Too much contaminated freedom So many panicking responsibilities I can't catch my breath My arms flail As I lift them in the air I have given up My organs have failed Under the surface I go And I open my eyes Seclusion is extinct A revelation to my mind Lungs filling to capacity With all of life's burdens I try to hold on But it adds more worries Feet at the bottom Something feels different I can only live freely At the bottom of the ceiling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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