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The Borderline

Silent waves crash against a dull grey beach, Where life, and death both feel just out reach And endless plain of plain white light, that only ceases during the moonless night Despite my efforts to end the dark, I can conjure up nothing, not even a spark The scent, lavender, and mildew Coloured dark black with a bright white hue Though defined they seem practically the same Living on the edge and the borderline are two whole different games

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/10/2016 12:38:00 AM
Hi NATHAN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA
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Date: 6/2/2011 3:21:00 PM
Creative and nice expressions on the borderline, nathan
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Nathan Ferguson
Date: 6/2/2011 5:16:00 PM
thank you but this piece was done by friend Alyssa Oliveri

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