The Boozy Buccaneer

A reckless young pirate named Greg
Drank whisky straight out of a keg.
He cried 'Look at me!'
In shark-ridden sea;
That drink cost an arm and a leg!


14.04.19

 Pirate Themed Limerick Poetry Contest: sponsored by Tania Kitchin
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Allison Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 7:33 AM
I Really loved this gem Wendy, the final line is priceless humour!!:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 9:40 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful Limerick win, Wendy, full of great humor. You and Greg had a great beginning :) Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
Watson Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:47 PM
Thanks, Eve. Yes, it seems that we caught the same rhyming cues but my protagonist was somewhat older!
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 7:15 PM
One of my favorites on the list. Congrats for the win.
Watson Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Greg and I were on the same wavelength but with differing outcomes! Congratulations on your win too.
Laurie Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 11:00 PM
G'day Wendy … really good play on words Wendy. Well done - Lindsay
Watson Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Thanks, Lindsey. I often seem to get the closing line in my head first then work backwards!
Kitchin Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Wendy, I enjoyed your witty and fun limerick, congratulations on your winning placement!
Watson Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:50 PM
Thanks, Tania. I often resort to idioms for the punchline!
May Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Haha..Great one Wendy...Congrats on your win..
Watson Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:54 PM
Thanks, Joseph. It took a while to get inspiration for this challenge for some reason so I'm glad it was well received.
Curtis Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Now this is Brilliant ! I only sported a smile...........but I was laughing on the inside...This Is a Winner !
Watson Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:54 PM
I'm glad you appreciated the word play,Jerry. Thank you so much for the encouragement.
Barden Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 9:10 AM
Oh, I like this a lot, Wendy ... it is definitely a winner! I was so last-minute that I took the easy bait and thought of my own name first ... it was early this morning and I was literally the last entry, so I couldn't waste time pondering and did the same, (working backward from the last line of the first Limerick) - "Greg", "peg-leg", rum "keg", etc.. JUST under the wire ... great minds think alike, haha! (Though mine's not so great lately, lol). Blessings and best wishes for the contest!!
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April 21, 2019 at 4:17 PM
Thanks,Greg. For a last minute effort yours was rather impressive! I have a tendency to use idioms and word play when writing limericks as in the closing line above. I must look up the origin of this one! Who was the poor first victim of lost limbs I wonder?!
Gauthier Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 9:18 PM
Good one, Wendy.
Watson Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 4:18 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment,Line.
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