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Written inspired by the song " the book of souls" by Iron Maiden, focusing on Mayan Mythology. 

contest sponsored by Robert James L

 

This heart~ a lovesick talisman f l a r e s fallen sparks, seeking Mayan glyphs of hope amidst layered lace of halcyon, illuminated with tears of black diamonds, for the empires ruined by the self-righteous kings throned in greed, draped in galactic gold, while ceremonial pyramids adorned with copper footprints, face the Venus star like sacred trees, engrossed in sacrificial salt, threading through ancient roots, r e m i n i s c i n g prophetic light of twin flames… But beneath the storm of wistful wildflowers carrying pollen-etched promises, there I revisit the book of soul, with laws of lethal lies, and ponder what must have the world witnessed when mysteries of life were mindlessly manipulated from vermilion vines in the vindictive valley of stone, where civilizations were cremated with smoke of hypocrisy, and pages of destruction… So, in this dejected domain of truth, I question green-eyed dragonflies fluttering in caves of confusion. Will devotees of the antique moon feel the sunrise within these words, woven in white? For I am the veiled bride, wearing shells and feathers, chained to the phasing cycles of Luna, chasing the aura of passing planets… A paradise painted with rhinestone riches and insincere ink can never last for an eternity, but will be written as a f i n a l surrender to roses that breathe the forgotten fragrance of the forsaken forest, perhaps through poignant tales of the past, I will find the frayed spirit of withered sagas, the essence of broken vows embalmed with ancestral rain...

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Date: 4/22/2025 10:52:00 AM
Your poems always mesmerize me. Thank you for interpreting the song so well. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 4/22/2025 11:07:00 AM
Thank you so much dear robert , im grateful for the second place in your contest, its truly an honor and i learnt something, mayan history, was interesting to learn so thank you for the very great and inspiring contest! Sending you light today and always
Date: 4/21/2025 10:23:00 PM
Dearest Inky,your poem is stunning—like a sacred tapestry woven with stardust, memory, and myth. The way you move through time and emotion, from ancient empires to the delicate ache of modern truths, is absolutely mesmerizing. Every line feels like a whisper from another realm, especially the imagery of “black diamonds,” “green-eyed dragonflies,” and “ancestral rain.” Your words carry both wisdom and longing, like poetry written on the edge of a dream. Truly breathtaking work. A fave...Hugs
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Date: 4/21/2025 1:04:00 PM
Dearest Ink, your wonderful poem examines love, grief, and history, focusing on life's cycles, former civilizations' burdens, and the quest for meaning in chaos and ruin. The tale shows that amidst the ruins of culture and ancient machinations, love and recall signify optimism. The poem uses vivid language to combine metaphysics with nature. Mysticism and depth are conveyed by "talisman," "halcyon," "sacrificial," and "vermilion." Contrasts like "black diamonds" and "green-eyed dragonflies" show beauty and sadness. Best wishes for the contest, and warmest hugs and vibes to you
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Date: 4/21/2025 7:26:00 AM
There have been so many interpretations of the song's lyrics. From Mayan mayhem to what perhaps will be the 'final surrender' of mankind's 'poignant tales of the past.' You have such a manner of writing that leaves a veil behind your words that flutters in the wind.
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Date: 4/21/2025 2:35:00 AM
fascinating poetry, embracing the spirit and the universe together, great images and alchemy, thanks poet for the wonderful inspiration blessings
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Date: 4/20/2025 9:39:00 PM
This is enchanting work, Ink! Read like a musical masterpiece, absolutely <3
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Date: 4/20/2025 12:00:00 PM
illuminated with tears of black diamonds, beneath the storm of wistful wildflowers carrying pollen-etched promises, wow those imagery .. what must have the world witnessed.. mmmm .. when mysteries of life were mindlessly manipulated from vermilion vines… dayum papi that’s brilliant!! devotees of the antique moon feel the sunrise within these words,Ooo that is woven in the purest beauty papi!! the veiled bride, wearing shells and feathers, *snaps snaps the fingers DRAMATICALLY * .. surrender to roses that breathe the forgotten fragrance of the forsaken forest, look at the kind of beauty u bring to life with your weaves !!! Mmmmmmm broken vows embalmed with ancestral rain.. freaking stunning papi!!!
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Date: 4/20/2025 9:51:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The Book of Souls" write. "Good Luck" Have A Very Happy and Blessed Easter Day...........
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Date: 4/20/2025 6:50:00 AM
Wow! Your wordplay is just , tooooo gooood
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