The Bomber

The Bomber knifes right through your guard
You duck and weave, a bobbing loon
Contentious crashing, bodies scarred
His lightning fists cradle your doom

Twelve timeless rounds against the champ
His blinding hook you never saw
The mildewed taste of canvas damp
Burnt failure sticking in your craw

Faint echoed cheers resounding deep
Thick sweat and blood now sting your eyes
Concealing bitter tears you weep 
To throw the towel in or rise

Surrender is the only shame
You stand and square with woozy smile
There’s naught to lose now in life’s game
Better the taste of blood than bile 

6/19/16
©Thomas W. Quigley
Mostly iambic tetrameter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/20/2016 5:21:00 AM
Parallelism of boxing and life with great success! Tom, you certainly know of life but here an indication is that you know of boxing as well! A seven!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/20/2016 7:01:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Date: 6/19/2016 8:04:00 PM
I really like this Tom. I have always been a fan of you and Joe Lewis. Great metaphor too!
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Date: 6/20/2016 7:05:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel!
Date: 6/19/2016 5:29:00 PM
wow, I love how this is also a metaphor of life!! Great description in this one, Tom. I especially liked the line that used the word mildewed.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/20/2016 7:07:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
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