The Boat

The boat sails through the mist.
Sounding its horn forlornly.
Its weary crew bound for home.
Salt stained and sweaty.
Seeking the loving embrace of wives and children.
And a comfortable chair-
Next to a roaring fire.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 22, 2009 at 7:33 PM
As a former boat owner, I can really relate to that "salt-stained and sweaty" feeling at the end of the fishing day. The imagery is outstanding, Daniel! Love, Carolyn
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November 22, 2009 at 7:15 PM
wonderful realistic descript, Daniel. IN the Navy I remember those times vividly. Thanks for bringing them back for me......I think - -Robert
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