The Blues Up Beat

The frost has etched the green grass white.
Lavender clouds chased a red rimmed moon.
The maples branches writhe with fright
and I'm alone in a cold, cold room.
A light snow lifts the nascent gloom.

Moon caste blue shadows sparkle, now dance, 
as twigs skitter across the flurried lawn.
They seem to twirl on point, they prance.
I watch through the pane to the dance drawn.
The bleakness of night is now redrawn.

A symphony of woodwinds flute,
reeds whistle and brush a rousing beat, 
deep in my heart a delight roots;
I'm warmed now by a scene so sweet,
snow for Christmas what could compete?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Johnson Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 12:23 AM
A captivating scene you have drawn. Congratulations and merry Christmas. Love, Joyce
Hamilton Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 6:24 AM
adjectives do not do this justice Debbie superb congrats on win "season's greetings" Shadow x smile hug
Gorelick Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 9:01 AM
Color and music in your poem Congrats on your win. BG
Roberts Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 7:35 AM
congrats Debbie on your winning entry in my contest, beautifully done
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 4:45 PM
Beautiful, the pictures you've put in my head almost make me wish that my Christmases came in winter too.
Richards Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 8:23 PM
Ahh.....that last stanza alone, makes me want to borrow it.......I won't, but it stands on it's own merit alone as just about as good as it gets!
Dunn Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 5:51 PM
Sweet and light it leaves one with a soft feeling within, i enjoyed this poem alot . cheri
Tacito Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Mother Nature bows to this writing. A Winter Orchestra for the masses. Beautiful.
Kithinji Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 7:31 AM
lovely dance of nature
Horne Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 3:10 PM
beautiful, Debs. You said your muse was on vacation - well, she's certainly back home now : )
Undertaker Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 3:19 AM
Debbie, the new avathar really gives a much wise look rather than the previous one.Good poem. (: )Jenish.
Ryerson Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 7:47 PM
From the title, I thought you were talkin about listening to the Blues cher! (Love them blues!) Nonetheless, a beautiful, somewhat lonely and haunting write in your own unique style...
Carroll Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 7:14 PM
Hi Debbie, A most refreshing write for the holiday season..Thanks for the visit to my verse.. Ken
Sergi Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:44 PM
like an artist paints a canvas you have written a beautiful work
Hunter Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 12:06 PM
Hi Debbie! Masterful as usual...I hope you are well....Caleb
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 8:02 PM
Hi Debbie my good friend, this poem is too cool Plus 25 if you know what I mean. good to hear from you.
Undertaker Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 7:51 PM
Debbie, I could sense a class write here.For some time i have planned to read poems from you,Suzanne,Andrea,Linda,nette,Carrie and other greats to get hold of meter.I would stop and take inspiration from great poets,which would be the best way to improve myself.Truly there are many poets mocking my poems.They do criticize me in their poems.I am taking this in a sportive spirit and am determined to improve myself. (: ) Jenish.
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 7:49 PM
Excellent! I especially enjoyed your last stanza. Bravo!
Deschler Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 11:45 AM
This is so beautiful, Debbie! I really enjoyed the read. A wonderful piece of poetry for the Christmas season! Was this written for a contest? If so, I wish you the best of luck!
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 1:26 AM
Love the colorful way you did yours. I need to write one like this one. On my drive to Oregon with Joe I was trying to do this poem for the contest and absolutely nothing came to me. So I did Dr. Ram's contest instead. To be posted soon!!!
Ekechukwu Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 5:00 PM
Wow! A lovely write and yes christmas is a special season to witness so colourful and am glad I wz born in d month of dec 1st. Thanks for ur noble visits. Alwaz, Based On Belief.
Harrell Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 3:08 PM
I love snow only on Christmas Day! Otherwise, I ,d rather go without all that hazardous driving :). Enjoy your winter poetry, Debbie! Hope you have a great Thanksgiving weekend :))
Mehta Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 9:33 PM
Enjoyed the write on a winter night, Debbie
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