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The Blue Sea

"In all things of nature there is something of the marvelous. " Aristole A day as clear as wine no clouds in sight. Oh - s e r e n i t y - In the cool summer wind, the sweet air smells of the sea. This beach, such a vast open space, like jagged spears white birds streak the sky, and the blue sea k i s s e s my painted toes. ____________________________ May 20, 2020 Poetry/Etheree/The Blue Sea Copyright Protected, ID 20-1252-923-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Submitted to contest #760 sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place

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Date: 6/19/2020 7:48:00 PM
Such clear,cool,concise poetry excellent work. Awesome, believe it.
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Date: 5/23/2020 1:13:00 AM
Love this write Constance.
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Date: 5/20/2020 1:20:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for an excellent model for your contest. God bless you.
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Date: 5/19/2020 10:29:00 PM
You swept me out to sea with this fabulous poem,...kisses.
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Date: 5/19/2020 8:40:00 PM
WOW!!! I totally love reading this Constance. You have taken me back to the sea.
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Date: 5/19/2020 4:38:00 PM
absolutely beautiful, Constance. Loved the last two lines. So creative. Can we go from ten syllable lines down to 1? I love reverse etheree also!
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Date: 5/19/2020 2:45:00 PM
what a charming example Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/18/2020 1:01:00 AM
Lovely Etheree Constance.. Beautifully done..
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/18/2020 11:53:00 PM
OMG..It is going to be a difficult contest..
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Constance La France
Date: 5/18/2020 9:34:00 AM
Jenish, thank you for the compliment on my Etheree, it is going to be my next contest _Constance
Date: 5/17/2020 10:52:00 PM
Just.... so NICE! Pristine imagery. Two thumbs way up, Constance! Joy and Light, Gershon
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Constance La France
Date: 5/18/2020 9:35:00 AM
Gershon, thanks for the compliment on my poem, it will be my next contest _Constance

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