The Blue Rose

My true love asked me for my hand.
Before I answer, I demand
He first must bring a bright blue rose.
"I'll search the world for one of those,"
Was his reply and off he went.
Then  many weary months he spent
In searching for elusive blue.
I turned away each offered hue.
As heartlessly, I bade him go
To every flower and garden show.
"Come back with rose for which I pine,
I long to claim rare rose as mine."
His spirits sagged each time I said,
"I do not want a pink or red.
I'll only settle for a blue
If I'm to give my heart to you.
He answered, "Love, I've done my best,
The difficulty of the quest
Has weakened me unto my death.
I've sought blue rose with my last breath.
With these last words, my true love died.
For many days and nights I've cried.
Where it has come from, no one knows
But on his grave a blue rose grows.




For Blue Rose contest.  Placed first
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M V Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 9:19 AM
Joyce,ongratulations on your well deserved win!
Brown Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Rose Poems" contest Joyce.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 4:25 AM
Congratulations Joyce xx
Williams Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 2:18 AM
Joyce congrats on your win..David
A   Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 1:32 AM
Joyce, I love nothing more than roses & unicorns... congratulations and thanks once again for full filling my rose passion... xox~ :-) PD
Brown Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 4:05 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Mac McGovern's contest "The Blue Rose" Love, Carol
George   Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 5:40 AM
AWESOME!!!!!! Congratulations on your well deserved first place win, Joyce. Lainie
Winter Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 3:50 PM
oh Joyce - WOW! LOVE THIS!! Congrats on a most well deserved First Place win! I am left with chills, still! hugs, shar xoxo
Conway Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 2:53 PM
Congradulations on your win-You deffinately deserved it!~Tirzah~
Belt Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 7:53 AM
Joyce congrats on your win with this masterful written piece.....and thanks for your many kind comments....Larry
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June 19, 2010 at 11:41 PM
Excellent poem, congratulations on your well deserved win ~ Sharon :)
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 9:38 PM
Congrats Joyce on your 1st place win in the Blue Rose contest.. a glorious poem..enjoy first place my friend.. with luv Linda-Marie
Clark Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 7:07 PM
Congratulations Joyce on 1st Place!! Terriffic write! Love Jeralynn
Mcgovern Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 6:19 PM
A truly fantastic poem. Congratulations on 1st place in my contest.
Blakeley Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 6:30 PM
WOW ! Wish I had said that. LOL
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 10:42 PM
wow, you were very impressive here with your blue rose story, JOyce.Very nice. And thanks for commenting on my blog. Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 9:28 PM
It's very imaginative one but looks real. The story of blue rose starts with love and ends at the grave. Good luck in the contest, Joyce
Muzzey Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 4:03 PM
Beautiful, a lovely write! I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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June 15, 2010 at 2:02 PM
What an awesome poem, Joyce! It's as if he were reaching up from the ground to grant you your wish. Soup mail shortly. Love, Carolyn
Belt Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Great Write Joyce.....Good Luck in the contest....Larry
Johnson Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 11:50 AM
WOW!!!!!!! how stirring and moving this piece is!!!!! I enjoyed it.
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