The Blue Rose

My true love asked me for my hand.
Before I answer, I demand
He first must bring a bright blue rose.
"I'll search the world for one of those,"
Was his reply and off he went.
Then  many weary months he spent
In searching for elusive blue.
I turned away each offered hue.
As heartlessly, I bade him go
To every flower and garden show.
"Come back with rose for which I pine,
I long to claim rare rose as mine."
His spirits sagged each time I said,
"I do not want a pink or red.
I'll only settle for a blue
If I'm to give my heart to you.
He answered, "Love, I've done my best,
The difficulty of the quest
Has weakened me unto my death.
I've sought blue rose with my last breath.
With these last words, my true love died.
For many days and nights I've cried.
Where it has come from, no one knows
But on his grave a blue rose grows.




For Blue Rose contest.  Placed first

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/15/2012 9:19:00 AM
Joyce,ongratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 8/15/2012 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Rose Poems" contest Joyce.
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Date: 8/13/2012 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce xx
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Date: 8/13/2012 2:18:00 AM
Joyce congrats on your win..David
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:32:00 AM
Joyce, I love nothing more than roses & unicorns... congratulations and thanks once again for full filling my rose passion... xox~ :-) PD
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Date: 6/25/2010 4:05:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Mac McGovern's contest "The Blue Rose" Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 5:40:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!! Congratulations on your well deserved first place win, Joyce. Lainie
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:50:00 PM
oh Joyce - WOW! LOVE THIS!! Congrats on a most well deserved First Place win! I am left with chills, still! hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 6/20/2010 2:53:00 PM
Congradulations on your win-You deffinately deserved it!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:53:00 AM
Joyce congrats on your win with this masterful written piece.....and thanks for your many kind comments....Larry
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Date: 6/19/2010 11:41:00 PM
Excellent poem, congratulations on your well deserved win ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/19/2010 9:38:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your 1st place win in the Blue Rose contest.. a glorious poem..enjoy first place my friend.. with luv Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:07:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on 1st Place!! Terriffic write! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 6/19/2010 6:19:00 PM
A truly fantastic poem. Congratulations on 1st place in my contest.
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Date: 6/16/2010 6:30:00 PM
WOW ! Wish I had said that. LOL
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Date: 6/15/2010 10:42:00 PM
wow, you were very impressive here with your blue rose story, JOyce.Very nice. And thanks for commenting on my blog. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/15/2010 9:28:00 PM
It's very imaginative one but looks real. The story of blue rose starts with love and ends at the grave. Good luck in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 6/15/2010 4:03:00 PM
Beautiful, a lovely write! I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 6/15/2010 2:02:00 PM
What an awesome poem, Joyce! It's as if he were reaching up from the ground to grant you your wish. Soup mail shortly. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/15/2010 12:58:00 PM
Great Write Joyce.....Good Luck in the contest....Larry
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Date: 6/15/2010 11:50:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!! how stirring and moving this piece is!!!!! I enjoyed it.
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