The Blue Collar Guy

In the stillness of my room I lay in bed arms snugged tightly around my pillow turned side-ways facing moon and light But it is not the burnt orange moon but glowing embers in his eyes that warm my vacant night. Tonight ,I see him just like on other nights He is the vision in my last waking thought He breathes within every breeze in my sleep He rests right beside me holding my hand and dreams. Tonight ,I recall his soft whisper in yesterdays'path Sweet -nothings in my ear touched soft-spots of my heart. I find him in mountains bathing in fresh rain riding on horses in memory lane. I watch him get closer calling out my name Its there when I kissed him , then ran far away. I see him on earlier days where He has found me It was love at first sight and instant chemistry . It was deep affection for a blue collar guy with dirt on his shirt and an amorous smile. I smelled poverty all over him ,and on his soaked fuel rag. Smelled the soap on his skin , and books in his bag. He passed one to me ,and said it is mine I made him a pledge that I'd scribble a line. One line followed others in chapters of time Chapters of star spumes, sunrise , and sky Chapters of novels about a blue collar guy.
Inspired by a book I read in my early teens .called 'Mysterious Mountain Man'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/4/2016 4:23:00 PM
Excellent poem, Charmaine. Beautiful ending. For a moment, I thought you were writing about me. Whew! I loved the poem though. Gorgeously expressed. Stay blessed. Love and joy to you. RW (Romantic Warrior)
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Date: 10/25/2016 7:07:00 AM
"I smelled poverty all over him" a great line among many. I enjoyed the feel of wanting in this piece.
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Date: 10/22/2016 6:45:00 AM
Very brilliant Charmaine. You depicted the book within few lines & it represents details about the mountain man. Well done.............//hugs
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Date: 10/22/2016 3:12:00 AM
This is the first time I've read your work. I enjoyed it. Thanks.
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Date: 10/22/2016 12:34:00 AM
Cont-PS, you can totally write a romance novel. If you do I want a signed copy:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/22/2016 12:31:00 AM
WoW! Charma, this is my kind of write. Your title alone drew me in. I had to know more about this blue collar guy. You had me hook line and sinker.It had romance and intrigue. I want you to know this was one hell of a dream/ vision. That mountain man was very handsome. I liked what I saw. It was like I was the girl in your story. You are a good writer because you are able to make the reader feel and connect with your words. An undeniable Seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/21/2016 3:53:00 PM
Wow, this was fantastic. I loved everything about this. This amazing poems took me on a journey where every image was clear in my mind. From beginning to end, this was stellar. "It was deep affection for a blue collar guy with dirt on his shirt and an amorous smile. I smelled poverty all over him ,and on his soaked fuel rag. Smelled the soap on his skin , and books in his bag." This was my favorite part.
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Date: 10/21/2016 10:00:00 AM
Like a romance novel, your words take the reader to dreamy places :)
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Date: 10/21/2016 4:09:00 AM
Some ghosts are welcome to our dreams, they resonate within our memories. This is a charmed interlude Charmaine. Might I ask the name of the book? A resounding 7 +.
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Date: 10/21/2016 7:18:00 AM
They do tend to stick with you! :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/21/2016 5:50:00 AM
The name of the book is Mysterious Mountain Man : )
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/21/2016 5:28:00 AM
It was my first silly love story book...A sillybook I read in my teens..It was called Mysterious Mountain Man.I did read a poem about poverty and inspired it more too.Thanks for reading : )
Date: 10/21/2016 4:00:00 AM
- Sounds like a great book to read - is the title of the book: The Blue Collar Guy? - A wonderful poem, Charmaine - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/21/2016 5:31:00 AM
Its too light of a book ..and one learn nothing from it..to be honest because its about that young love...I wouldnt read it again now :) .But for those days in.my teens it was my first pg book I read I believe..: ).. The Blue Collar guy ..I made the title...:) ...Blue Collar guys unlike White Collar guys belong to the poor or middle class society...Anyways..thanks for reading sweet sunshine girl..hugs.
Date: 10/21/2016 1:26:00 AM
Your writes are always enchanting, Charmaine. There is this magical, ethereal quality that endears. Lovely, dear.
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Date: 10/20/2016 7:11:00 PM
That's some book! oh la la! :)
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Date: 10/20/2016 6:33:00 PM
It is so nice when we can get inspired by anothers write whether book, song, or poem. I'm not familiar with the book but the poem is lovely.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/21/2016 11:31:00 AM
Back to read again...a fav
Date: 10/20/2016 6:29:00 PM
very beautifully painted charmaine excellent pen pal i pray you have a blessing of a weekend
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