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The Blue Club

She had aspirations
Wanted to belong
Hung out in swanky clubs
With the creme de la creme
That percentile with pure blue blood
Attended all the soirees
She dressed the part
Loved to strut her stuff
Never turning down a challenge
She blew till she was blue
A girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do



Submitted on January 7, 2019 for contest BLUE sponsored by CRAIG CORNISH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/13/2019 8:54:00 AM
Had me smiling Line, sad/true/entertaining and you didn't overuse blue
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Date: 1/13/2019 10:01:00 AM
Thanks, Craig. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/11/2019 7:40:00 PM
Line, what a creative outside the box take on this challenge! Well done! Congratulations!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/11/2019 8:25:00 PM
Thanks, PS, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 1/11/2019 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Line :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/11/2019 5:14:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi.
Date: 1/11/2019 4:01:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Line:-) hugs Jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/11/2019 4:04:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/11/2019 2:35:00 PM
Such passion emanates from your words, Line! Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/11/2019 3:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carolyn. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/9/2019 2:35:00 PM
Let me think this one over, she blew until she was blue, very well played my friend. :-) I winner for sure!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/9/2019 3:03:00 PM
No explanation needed. LOL
Date: 1/7/2019 8:28:00 PM
Whoa Line! Oh, my. I may need to take little shower after this one. Steamy indeed!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/7/2019 9:05:00 PM
O Caren. LOL
Date: 1/7/2019 5:22:00 PM
lol Line quite a steamy take on blue lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/7/2019 9:05:00 PM
LOL just an innocent little poem, Jan. Not sure what you mean, Jan. LOL

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