Notes About The Poem

The Blue Club

She had aspirations wanting to belong
Hung out in swanky clubs
With the creme de la creme
That percentile with pure blue blood

Attended all the soirees
She dressed the part
Loved to strut her stuff
Never turning down a challenge

She blew till she was blue
A girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do



AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Cornish Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 8:54 AM
Had me smiling Line, sad/true/entertaining and you didn't overuse blue
Gauthier Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 10:01 AM
Thanks, Craig. Much appreciated.
Awtry Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Line, what a creative outside the box take on this challenge! Well done! Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 8:25 PM
Thanks, PS, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Sands Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 4:42 PM
Congratulations for your win Line :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 5:14 PM
Thanks, Heidi.
Allison Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 4:01 PM
dropping back with my congrats Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 4:04 PM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
Devonshire Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 2:35 PM
Such passion emanates from your words, Line! Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 3:42 PM
Thank you so much, Carolyn. Much appreciated.
May Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 2:35 PM
Let me think this one over, she blew until she was blue, very well played my friend. :-) I winner for sure!
Gauthier Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 3:03 PM
No explanation needed. LOL
Krutsinger Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Whoa Line! Oh, my. I may need to take little shower after this one. Steamy indeed!
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 9:05 PM
O Caren. LOL
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 5:22 PM
lol Line quite a steamy take on blue lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 9:05 PM
LOL just an innocent little poem, Jan. Not sure what you mean, Jan. LOL
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