Unseeking Seeker Poet Ottava rima

The bliss continuum

Looking at flow of life as a seamless whole
and feeling within, polarities mingle,
as we joyously play out our ordained role,
the eye of soul in our heart becomes single.
Becoming living light that scriptures extol,
we assimilate in form, love’s bliss tingle,
doing nothing at all, simply being still,
breath by breath surrendering to God our will.

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Karen Jones January 8, 2024 at 2:13 AM This evokes a sense of knowing that obedience and surrender is selfless and beautiful! Great job writing a spiritual poem! Unseeking Seeker January 8, 2024 at 4:17 AM Thank you, Karen

Victor Buhagiar January 8, 2024 at 1:13 AM A great solid yet well-flowing poem and very spiritual in context. Unseeking Seeker January 8, 2024 at 2:04 AM Thank you, Victor dear

Ink Empress January 7, 2024 at 9:40 PM This is so beautiful and seamless how your lines flow as always dear seeker, i really love this ottava rima. Especially the line “ the eye of soul in our heart becomes single.” So deeply soulful. And “ we assimilate in form, love’s bliss tingle, doing nothing at all, simply being still,“ meaningful! So much conveyed in sheer eloquence. Pleasure reading this. Unseeking Seeker January 7, 2024 at 10:47 PM Thank you, dear IE. Delighted you find some value in these words :)