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The bliss continuum

Looking at flow of life as a seamless whole and feeling within, polarities mingle, as we joyously play out our ordained role, the eye of soul in our heart becomes single. Becoming living light that scriptures extol, we assimilate in form, love’s bliss tingle, doing nothing at all, simply being still, breath by breath surrendering to God our will.

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Date: 1/8/2024 2:13:00 AM
This evokes a sense of knowing that obedience and surrender is selfless and beautiful! Great job writing a spiritual poem!
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Date: 1/8/2024 4:17:00 AM
Thank you, Karen
Date: 1/8/2024 1:13:00 AM
A great solid yet well-flowing poem and very spiritual in context.
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Date: 1/8/2024 2:04:00 AM
Thank you, Victor dear
Date: 1/7/2024 9:40:00 PM
This is so beautiful and seamless how your lines flow as always dear seeker, i really love this ottava rima. Especially the line “ the eye of soul in our heart becomes single.” So deeply soulful. And “ we assimilate in form, love’s bliss tingle, doing nothing at all, simply being still,“ meaningful! So much conveyed in sheer eloquence. Pleasure reading this.
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Date: 1/7/2024 10:47:00 PM
Thank you, dear IE. Delighted you find some value in these words :)

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