The Blessing

It frothed, it boiled from deep within her soul, fermenting in the furnaces of hell. Considering how best to take her toll, With heaving breast, stared down the infidel, and belched it forth with foul and fetid smell. It launched, depraved and deathly, to the skies; the horror of its impact filled his eyes. Try though he might, he could not quell his fears, and thus, did rationality despise. The evil jabberwock fell on his ears.
---------- for the Dizain Poetry Contest Poetry Contest sponsored by Sotto Poet written on 10/18/22 what some people apparently think when you say, "God bless you!" :-)
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Miller Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:24 AM
Just GREAT!
Alex Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 4:28 AM
Great writing. Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 2:35 PM
So saying, " God Bless You" to some people is like saying something horrible and evil to them. Enjoyed reading this winning work. Way to go. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Sara
Kyser Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 3:05 PM
Thanks, Sara. I’ve seen some strange responses!
Poet Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 8:22 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Jeff. You have composed such an excellent poem.
Kyser Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 11:35 AM
Thanks so much for hosting! I appear to have a sarcastic streak :-)
Romios Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:06 AM
Oh, that jabberwock! Jeff, I am quite pleased with this write and am FAVING it. You do have a way with a pen, my friend. You, entertain! Fabulous! Huggs, Pangie
Kyser Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 10:27 AM
You’re too funny, my friend! I did not expect many likes on this one! Thanks for appreciating my silliness
Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 8:45 PM
Sounds more like a curse. Wow!
Kyser Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 10:26 AM
There’s a funny backstory to this one, lol, some folks act like a blessing is a curse, so it got me chuckling about what they must imagine when someone says “God bless you”!
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