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The Blessing

It frothed, it boiled from deep within her soul, fermenting in the furnaces of hell. Considering how best to take her toll, With heaving breast, stared down the infidel, and belched it forth with foul and fetid smell. It launched, depraved and deathly, to the skies; the horror of its impact filled his eyes. Try though he might, he could not quell his fears, and thus, did rationality despise. The evil jabberwock fell on his ears.
---------- for the Dizain Poetry Contest Poetry Contest sponsored by Sotto Poet written on 10/18/22 what some people apparently think when you say, "God bless you!" :-)

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Date: 11/6/2022 7:24:00 AM
Just GREAT!
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Date: 11/6/2022 4:28:00 AM
Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/5/2022 2:35:00 PM
So saying, " God Bless You" to some people is like saying something horrible and evil to them. Enjoyed reading this winning work. Way to go. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Sara
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 11/5/2022 3:05:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. I’ve seen some strange responses!
Date: 11/5/2022 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Jeff. You have composed such an excellent poem.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 11/5/2022 11:35:00 AM
Thanks so much for hosting! I appear to have a sarcastic streak :-)
Date: 10/19/2022 8:06:00 AM
Oh, that jabberwock! Jeff, I am quite pleased with this write and am FAVING it. You do have a way with a pen, my friend. You, entertain! Fabulous! Huggs, Pangie
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/19/2022 10:27:00 AM
You’re too funny, my friend! I did not expect many likes on this one! Thanks for appreciating my silliness
Date: 10/18/2022 8:45:00 PM
Sounds more like a curse. Wow!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/19/2022 10:26:00 AM
There’s a funny backstory to this one, lol, some folks act like a blessing is a curse, so it got me chuckling about what they must imagine when someone says “God bless you”!

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