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The Blessed Lie

Wandering an abandoned path Fearful, lonely and dismayed A withered spirit broken by one For a healing hand I prayed Lift the pain bestowed upon me Release me from this hell Assure me now that I am loved Exalt the heart that fell No sooner than I spoke these words You knelt and took my hand Who are you, why are you here An answer I demand I am not an Angel heavensent Although I could pretend I am just man that sees your pain And wants to be your friend I come without false promises And lie, I wouldn’t dare I can not erase your painful past Or deminish the burdens you bear There was something in his gentle voice That set my soul at ease We walked and talked for hours Along the river lined with trees Hours turned to days then weeks He never left my side He’d lift me up each time I stumbled And brush off my foolish pride Then one day it occured to me My painful past had been erased Gone were the burdens that I carried With peace and love they’ve been replaced Then I remembered the day we met You said you were my friend You said you’d never lie to me On that I could depend You said you weren’t an Angel Sent from heavens door How could you tell such lies You are that and so much more

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Date: 3/13/2010 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Well crafted piece of art. Ernilando
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Date: 3/13/2010 7:10:00 AM
Excellent write about our knight in shining armour...Congratulations on being featured this week..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/12/2010 12:11:00 AM
Lovely Dawn. Well done on this deserved piece being featured this week, keep penning, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 3/11/2010 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations Dawn, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/9/2010 7:42:00 AM
If you have found someone like the poem says, hang on to that person! There may only be one or two in a lifetime. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Dawn. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 4:33:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 3/7/2010 7:03:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Nice use of rhyme. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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