The Black Caribbean Sun

7:13 P.M., August 25,1971 : " The Caribbean Sun Died "
12:00 Noon; I said " F0R the Eons of " FOREVER " I Shall LOVE YOU "
                                            " I  D O "
A Life Time, on Earth,  " TOGETHER " for all Eternity :  " YOU my Bride "
The Sky becomes an Ebony ; " RAINBOW "  " Death's TEARS Cried "
                                        " MY L O V E "
FOREVERLASTING " LOVE " the Black Clouds, " Sing OF Death "
Inhale ; " Infinity "  Rip the Nth of " LOVE " from my  " HEART "
                                    " MY  B R E A T H " 
As I watch the Boom, Scrape across the " Princess's  Life "
Insanity, Attacks me : " MY Dear GOD : Did YOU take my Life, MY WIFE?
                                 " MY  E V E R T H I N G "
600 feet "SHE" Plummets; into the Sand ; of the Blue Caribbean Sea
The Sky Screams ; the Earth Breathes It's Last ; as Does MY HEART
                                     " MY  H E A R T "
I Feel YOU Die, I feel " LOVE " , DIE;  " Such PAIN : Such SORROW "
A Cold Lonely Night : Alone Again : the Sunrise Dies " TOMORROW "
                                " WITH  E M O T I O N "
I Cry for a Heart : I LOVED so Dear, Lenore My WIFE : will ALWAYS  "BE"
The Brightest " LIGHT " ~ in the Blackest Hour ; of the  " EONS of ETERNITY "
                                   " I  L O V E  T H E E "
                                      "  F O R E V E R  "
                                      " L  E  N  O  R  E "

Written by HGarvey Daniel Esquire for the "Contest : " MY Darkest Hour " 
                         Sponsored By  Ryland Matthews
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 12/5/2010 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Ryland, HG
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Date: 11/30/2010 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 11/29/2010 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations HG on your win in Ryland Matthew's "My Darkest Hour" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:32:00 AM
In such a unique style, this poem cries tear of loss and pain. Well done, HG! Congratulations on your win. a remarkable and sad tale this is. love, Carrie
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Date: 11/27/2010 11:17:00 PM
HG congratulations on your success with this gem.. Hope your weekend is a fabulous one ;-) blessings and love Wilma
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Date: 11/27/2010 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations HG on your lovely poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Ryland's contest with this sad and touching poem, HG. Peace and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 11/27/2010 7:06:00 AM
Congrats HG my silent beau on your HM in Ryland's contest with this rare beauty entry with words so profound ... enjoy your very special honor with luv and a happy weekend too ..your "Sweetheart" forever and always...
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Date: 11/27/2010 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on this honorable mention win in the contest, HG
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Date: 11/24/2010 12:34:00 PM
This is such a heart wrenching write, HG--I can't help but feel the sadness that exudes from this-- I can only imagine the pain that you went through this very dark day-- I think writing can definitely help and you've done so with such heart--Lenore sure was lucky to have had your love-- thank you as well for your sweet congrats, made me smile :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 11/22/2010 9:31:00 PM
I remember you telling me this story, HG. So sad it is. Truly. Thanks for your congrats. Soupmail!
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Date: 11/20/2010 6:35:00 AM
This must have been a heartbreaking moment, HG. I can feel the pain in your poem. We never stop loving people after they die, we just have to find a way to move forward. A lonely option for sure. Best wishes in Ryland's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/16/2010 9:17:00 PM
HG what a heartfelt write, one cant deny the emotion felt while reading this beautiful piece of yours. Wishing you all the best for Ryland's contest ~love Wilma
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Date: 11/16/2010 9:41:00 AM
It is very cold here in Springfield,Ohio today. But I must say your poetry has pulled my heartstrings. Thank you for sharing it HG. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:23:00 AM
An awesome recovery of memory, such a collage of emotions fashion these images. My brother, HG, how are things going. You are in my prayers always, God bless you as you write.
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:02:00 AM
You are welcomed Sir. got to give credit where it is due. Thanks for your observations on mine and David's covenant to each other. One would have to know our history to fully understand our love, but I do appreciate when others can see there is something extra-ordinary here. Always love, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/16/2010 3:31:00 AM
Your title HG, makes one want to read this write, then your opening statement, it sends a kind of shock wave, so of course, no recourse, one has to see the whole and see it I did. It has been years now, but plain to see, the memory of Lenore is still holding a big chunk of your heart. Very deep words and meaning here. Be of comfort HG. Much Luv, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/15/2010 5:49:00 PM
Enjoyed this poetry tonight and have a great night
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Date: 11/15/2010 1:14:00 PM
The darkest hour of your life. You just cant get over something like that I know. Well written HG. BG
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