The Birth of Fall

The sound of thunder
Rings through the cool autumn air
Announcing the end
Of the Summer's final breath
And the coming of Fall's birth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Blakeley Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 5:39 AM
I like this..cause' I am sick of summer !! I have read all your poems today..great !!
Taylor Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 5:19 PM
Excellent tanka, Larry. Great job. Ralph
Devonshire Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Like the comparison of thunder to summer's "final breath," Larry. A great tanka and I wish you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 7:37 AM
veracious and well written!
Roberts Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 7:38 PM
nice one Larry, good luck in the contest
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