Notes About The Poem

The Birth and Death of an Engineer

An engineer's uniform
sparked a child's imagination,
and, one strange and early morn,
he was in a railway station.

An old man lost in reverie,
couldn't begin to understand.
His cloudy eyes could barely see
a young lad's outstretched hand.

There, beneath a station clock,
by knobby cane, supported, 
all choked up, he couldn't talk - 
how was he here transported?

His railway watch, long unused,
hung from a chain of gold. 
Thro' stained-glass windows' light diffused,
he saw a palm outstretched to hold.

Then, like a railroad car on a mobius strip,
a child woke up from a mystic dream,
as an old man dropped in the child's grip, 
a watch, and vanished, dead, like steam.
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Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 5:30 AM
Whoa!! Sad but a reality of life. It reads as if the person lived a good life though. Thank you for sharing this one with us. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Crandall Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 2:27 PM
Thanks, Sara! Yep, I think so - loved his work.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 1:56 PM
great story....totally engaging. Well penned. Faving.
Crandall Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 6:54 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 3:46 PM
Wow. Amazing storytelling, David.
Crandall Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 3:19 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Smith  Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 10:50 PM
This is a beautifully surreal and moving piece, David! The concept of the "mobius strip" is such a clever way to illustrate the cyclical, mysterious connection between the dreaming child and the departing elder. You painted the scene so vividly with atmospheric details like the diffused stained-glass light and the gold-chained watch, and that final image of vanishing "like steam" provides a hauntingly perfect conclusion. Wonderful storytelling through verse!
Crandall Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 11:57 AM
Thanks so much, Alison!
Wolf Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 8:32 PM
You really had me going there, David. ~ Fellow Dreamer
Crandall Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 9:53 PM
That's good! Hey, I've put you through enough of my poems, but I got the feeling that you are at least somewhat fond of baseball and I wrote a baseball themed poem today called The Saddest Place on Earth. It's sort of a sequel or tribute to Casey at the Bat.
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